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Times Termite

O my love and passion!
And looks and glamour’s obsession
May you know upfront!
From teeth of time’s termite
Spared alone is sorrow

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 3:10:00 PM

    gosh, how did I ever miss this one. I really enjoyed this one. The last line is incredible.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Beautiful tanka, my friend! Cheers, Jack

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/6/2012 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The words of praise coming from you has filled me with joy. Thank you.
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:42:00 PM

    Mohammad, a deep sad image.., thank you for sharing your wonderful tanka, Good night*PD

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/6/2012 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Tanka. I am so grateful. Love
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 5:16:00 PM

    Thank you for your beautiful poem Mohammad. Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/6/2012 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your lavish praise, Anne! You are so kind.
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Wow..this rocked me to my core! Better than good; brilliant I must say!

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 10/27/2012 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind appreciation. I am so grateful.