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Build up

Continue to push me further,
Force my vision into a raging blur,

Inevitably consumed by the vengeful fire,
Despising you with my every fiber,

Assuming me to be your personal jester for your entertainment,
With such cynical thoughts you would have me in containment,

One day you'll see the abandoned hat on the ground,
You'll search but your jester wont be found,

Till the hour you're sentenced for your heinous crimes,
Until that day I'll bide my time.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 4:04:00 PM
    POWERFUL poem Ty. - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 10/26/2012 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, and i hope the same for you as well. :D
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:24:00 PM
    Some deep ink. What will they do when you're gone? Enough said poet!

    Price Avatar Ty Price
    Date: 10/26/2012 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, im happy you enjoyed it.