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Where are you

The sun  is shining
Water is azure blue
Lying by the poolside
"where are you"

The waterfall sends ripples
Across the waters skin
Saying I will relax you
If you dare to come in.

What an idyllic place
To share a kiss or two
To snuggle up together
"where are you"

I am eating a pavlova
Covered with nuts and cream
Have a drink in my hand
But nothing is as it seems

Cos i have just woken up
To a cold autumn hue
I am still asking 
"Why weren't  you there too".






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  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:45:00 PM

    An urging wanting of existence, of which we all enter, or walk with. Nicely crafted :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you James ...Seren
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:12:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Seren. I enjoyed reading it :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Bethany...Seren
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Enjoyed your lovely poem Seren. :-) Hazel

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Hazel...Seren
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Really good words and beautifully written. - Thank you. Have a enjoyable weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops missed all the ones on here. Sorry or delayed thankmyou...Seren
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Sounds wonderful, enjoyed your lovely poem, love Elizabeth

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Elizabeth