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First Day of Fall

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First Day of Fall

fall entered with grace
gentle were her breezes
sun filled were her skies


Sept 22, 2008

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:05:00 AM

    What you have written is wonderful personification. [the leaves fall/ from the maple tree -- a gentle breeze] present tense, objective, personification not used ..haiku Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 2:59:00 AM

    Well done Cynthia - oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:53:00 AM

    Good imagery.Why not in present tense?