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Don't Tell Me No Lies

Lucilla Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Don't Tell Me No Lies

Don't tell me you love me, when you've done something wrong. Don't tell me you love me, when you have broken my heart. Don't tll me no stories, don't tell me no lies. Don't tell me you'll change, that things will be right - for when something is broken - you can't make it right. Don't try the sweet talk. It's not going to work. I've been through that road, so many a time before. The sweet talk is nothing, but a way to tell lies, with a touch of sweetness, but they are still lies. I'm begging you - don't even try...
10/25/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:42:00 PM
    Very powerful and relevent poem. Well done.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 10:50:00 PM
    Love this one Lucilla!! Sounds like something up my alley. Tell him again girl friend. I so hate liars. One love, Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 6:15:00 AM
    i read about the lies, here Lucilla, but it is the second line on the 3rd stanza, that gets to me, that anyone should have to walk down that road. love this profound and sincere poem of yours.....

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 10:05:00 AM
    Dear Lucy, I'm hearing you and feeling you out loud... I wish from the beginning of time. Lying was never invented... but..you know some times people think we want or need to be lied to... I truly do not know what hurts more the lie or the truth.... cover your ears... wink...love your poem... I know you had enough...lovepd

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/28/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    PD. I think that the truth is always better, no matter how much it hurts. At least you know where you stand. many blessings to you on this beautiful day. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:01:00 PM
    Now I'm sending you smiles and good wishes. Re. My last write. It's all from a past and a different place. All is good Hun. Hugs michael

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/28/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad that it's all bwehind you. Many blessings. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Hi Lucilla love this no one should have to luisten too lies, all the best Owen

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/28/2012 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 11:45:00 AM
    GOOD one on telling lies, Lucilla. That sweet talk will get them nowhere with you!! yes, it has snowed already in Utah. that's what inspired my roses poem. t hanks for your comment on it!

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/28/2012 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading. Lying is never good. I wish I was there to see the snow. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 10:08:00 AM
    LIES HAVE SUCH SHORT LEGS LUCILLA AND YOUR WORDS STING THE HEART LUV .. I DETEST LIES AND LIARS TOO .. SOME R FAMOUS FOR BAITING WITH TALL TALES .. VERY EMOTIONAL PIECE ..

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I don't like people that lie, because the can never be trusted. But you know what they say - The lie lives until the truth gets there. Have a great weekend. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:24:00 AM
    Love the poem. Check out my poem, The Gracious Woman.

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you . I will. lucilla
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:03:00 AM
    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Lucilla. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Carol. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 2:54:00 AM
    Love can not be built on lies. - A very good poem Lucilla. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. :) oxox - lots of good thoughts to you from / / Anne-Lise :)

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are right. Love can not be built on lies. Have a great weekend. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:23:00 PM
    Very nice poem! Love it so much.

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much. Some people can lie about anything. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 10:20:00 PM
    Sound like you've made up your mind lady...that's some fierce imagery! I love the direct approach, the honey covered sweet talk, that didn't work..Love it!

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/25/2012 10:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. It's always best to speak with the truth. Many blessings. Lucilla
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 6:16:00 PM
    Wow all the writes tonight are about love it's really amazing! Light & Love

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/25/2012 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie. Sometimes it's a love that goes wrong. lucilla