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Creaks in the Stairs

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Below is the poem entitled Creaks in the Stairs which was written by poet Zhian Mostofi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Creaks in the Stairs

Theres a child
That answers the question with a thousand wishes
Witch, from his tongue, he couldn't hold in even for amusement
Because they, like a first impression,
Need the humble accompaniment of a friend
And so,
Instead of asking for 3 wishes,
It's the 4th till the end

It's when She asks at all!
"Why should it matter to them?"

"After all, I am but a friend of a friend of a friend
who knows...
just when 
to stare 
and when to listen"

Kiss Her!!

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:53:00 AM
    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Zhian. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

    Mostofi Avatar Zhian Mostofi
    Date: 11/3/2012 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks dear :) all thats going on this year, we'd be proud to be inspired at all hahaha
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:41:00 PM
    enjoyed you lovely poem Zhian, love elizabeth