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About This Poem

Snow Falls

snow falls 

b r e a t h l e s s l y

the last roses

of autumn

e x h a l e

Written 10/24/12
For Joann Grisetti's Gogyoka Poetry Contest

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    harry horsman
    Date: 12/27/2012 10:08:00 AM
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    back here again with this beauty.. cannot view your other pages only page one....See my blog...
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    George Zamalea
    Date: 11/11/2012 7:21:00 PM
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    I read this poem and it super. Keep on. By the way, congratulations. And thank you for your comments.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/10/2012 5:51:00 PM
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    Andrea, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/9/2012 1:56:00 AM
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    Congratulations Andy, I think gail meant 'no surprise' love this one xx
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 11/8/2012 4:50:00 PM
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    Andrea, this is so surprise that this won a placement. I fell in love with this poem when he first posted it. Congrats. Luv, Gail
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    craig cornish
    Date: 11/8/2012 3:11:00 PM
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    Beautiful Andrea, Congrats on your well deserved first in Joann’s contest!
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    Tanya Harrington
    Date: 11/8/2012 2:44:00 PM
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    Love, love it! Congrats :) Tanya
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 11/8/2012 10:51:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 11/8/2012 5:51:00 AM
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    Congrats, Andea, for your tot win:) Jag

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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 11/8/2012 4:50:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your great win with this beauty, Andrea!
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 11/8/2012 1:41:00 AM
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    Beautifully stated Andrea! Congrats on your win!
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    Tahera Mannan
    Date: 11/7/2012 9:49:00 PM
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    This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Andrea. Thanks for all the lovely comments on mine.
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 11/7/2012 8:14:00 PM
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    MY BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR GRAND WIN MY DEAR FRIEND ANDREA! CHEERS MY FRIEND! THANKS FOR YOUR CONGRATULATORY COMMENTS TO0. I'M SO SAD, I DON'T HAVE MUCH TIME IN PS THIS WEEK AND CAN'T GO AND CONGRATULATE OTHER WINNERS 'COZ MY PC ISN'T WITH ME. I'LL TRY TO CATCH UP MAYBE NX WK. AGAIN MILLION THANKS! love/hugs, LG
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    Heather Ober
    Date: 11/7/2012 7:56:00 PM
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    I LOVE this! The imagery and personification are just wonderful. Congrats on the well-deserved win :)
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 11/7/2012 7:15:00 PM
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    Just beautiful Andrea, congrats on your special win love vie
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 11/7/2012 5:19:00 PM
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    Beautiful - congratulations.
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    Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/6/2012 1:18:00 PM
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    An elegant Tanka. Simple yet impressive. I am glad you like my Haiku Buried Hearts. Thanks. I am sure soup team will salvage your member area and your mail. Just be patient. Love. -Mohammad
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 10/30/2012 2:17:00 PM
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    Had to read this one again. Lovely poem. love phyl
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    Darrel Smith
    Date: 10/28/2012 6:05:00 PM
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    i like this
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    daver austin
    Date: 10/28/2012 11:19:00 AM
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    Beautiful. I noticed three white roses on our back yard bush this morning. They looked so fresh in the cold. The pinks were drooping. LOve, daver
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 10/28/2012 6:36:00 AM
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    Great poetry Andrea. Love the way you write!! Hugs n luv Michael
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 10/27/2012 5:45:00 PM
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    Awesome Andrea! Heck, that should be your nick name! This is indeed breathtaking.
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 10/27/2012 2:11:00 PM
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    Yes that darn white stuff came early and we don't want it around. Love you poem. love phyl
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 10/27/2012 12:40:00 PM
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    Breathtaking beauty portrayed here Andrea. Good luck with the contest with this great entry.
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    Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 11:23:00 AM
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    this is amazing....so much said in so few words...loved it Andrea....xxxxx...:))
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 10/27/2012 10:55:00 AM
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    Your tanka shows a very wonderful picture giving me a great vicarious experience of snow falls time/season my dear friend! Good luck and best wishes in the contest! love, Leonora
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 10/27/2012 9:46:00 AM
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    I love the presentation; I didnt know we can use different font size! Best of luck in Joann's contest with this gogyoka, Andrea! Ruben.
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 10/27/2012 8:09:00 AM
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    ...and then I frantically run home to cut the final buds of this year to proudly (and sadly) display them on my kitchen table...Gosh, I didn't know you felt this way too!!!! Nice work, Andrea!....Soup Mail....
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/27/2012 6:54:00 AM
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    I love the poem and how you used the size of the font too create the mood. Well done.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/26/2012 8:03:00 PM
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    Andrea, thank you for stopping and saying hi,,it is very nice of you. I know you are a busy lady... thanks... and I love your little tanka... always...pd
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