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A Wish

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                                              in the fountain
                                              a coin for a wish
                                              makes ripples






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  1. Date: 12/23/2013 3:02:00 PM

    I visited this poem and it now quacks..but the senryu was about the fountain..tossed coins..ripples and wishes If I remember.May.your wish be granted in the coming year Ruben..May your Christmas be filled with peace and your birthday on the 27th a dreamy one.Happy Christmas to you..Cami..beatriz..the chef..and those you care for.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:11:00 PM

    The ink in your pen Is talking to strangers And it made me smile

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Lol...ths bee is the funny ending punch... and yes u need help...thanks...

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:18:00 PM

    this is nice and pretty Ruben, i see a wave heading my way, lol... I will pass on the ripples, and toss in many greedy coins, maybe one of my coins will reveal a true wish. your poems are always so perfect,... always with a smile... LINDA

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:33:00 AM

    Excellent as ever dear friend! Noticed your sweet and thoughtful comment on Harry's blog. Appreciated more than you know. All the best to you and yours in 2013! Hugs, shar xoxo

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:07:00 PM

    An amazing Haiku, Ruben -lovely picturization. I admire your talent. Thanks for your kind comments on my Quatrain Journey of Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:12:00 AM

    Love it! I've got a photo of my Dad at this "Fontaine de Trevi", where, many years ago, he obeyed the tradition... and got scolded by my mother for unchristian behavior... Everyone's got her/his own mind, right? We, children at that time, loved the story; and I still love the memory of it! Such sweet days with Mom and Dad... So, I'm asking for permission to write your poem and name under the photo, dear highly talented Soup poet friend of mine! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:17:00 AM

    Hi Ruben,at the moment the only tutor i can be of is changing diapers :),or rocking at 2,3,4,5 in the morning :)..and you know I can never be a tutor to my tutor :).Its nice to find some time and read these great posts.Hope all is well with hurricaine sandy behind the door.Send my regards to beatriz.By the way Ow that must be fontana di trevi above.. Wonderful :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 2:02:00 PM

    And on those ripples the wish is granted..Great work..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by...My work "Down Where" is now finished..Sara

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:26:00 AM

    Love it! To mine faves! As you would say! Jim

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:33:00 PM

    I'll say it....you have a lot of imagery contained in these little writes. To me it's ingenious!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:55:00 AM

    Very nice Senryu Ruben!Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:56:00 PM

    I liked this one very much Ruben. It reads perfect in my mind. Thanks for sharing it. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:32:00 PM

    very nice, nothing like the ripple effect!!