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About This Poem

A Wish

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                                 in the fountain —
                                 a coin for a wish
                                 makes ripples





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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 4/24/2013 1:46:00 PM
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    Lol...ths bee is the funny ending punch... and yes u need help...thanks...
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 3/1/2013 7:18:00 PM
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    this is nice and pretty Ruben, i see a wave heading my way, lol... I will pass on the ripples, and toss in many greedy coins, maybe one of my coins will reveal a true wish. your poems are always so perfect,... always with a smile... LINDA
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    sharon weimer
    Date: 1/10/2013 9:33:00 AM
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    Excellent as ever dear friend! Noticed your sweet and thoughtful comment on Harry's blog. Appreciated more than you know. All the best to you and yours in 2013! Hugs, shar xoxo
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    Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/25/2012 5:07:00 PM
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    An amazing Haiku, Ruben -lovely picturization. I admire your talent. Thanks for your kind comments on my Quatrain Journey of Love. -Mohammad
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    Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/17/2012 12:12:00 AM
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    Love it! I've got a photo of my Dad at this "Fontaine de Trevi", where, many years ago, he obeyed the tradition... and got scolded by my mother for unchristian behavior... Everyone's got her/his own mind, right? We, children at that time, loved the story; and I still love the memory of it! Such sweet days with Mom and Dad... So, I'm asking for permission to write your poem and name under the photo, dear highly talented Soup poet friend of mine! Blessings, Hanitra
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 11/6/2012 12:17:00 AM
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    Hi Ruben,at the moment the only tutor i can be of is changing diapers :),or rocking at 2,3,4,5 in the morning :)..and you know I can never be a tutor to my tutor :).Its nice to find some time and read these great posts.Hope all is well with hurricaine sandy behind the door.Send my regards to beatriz.By the way Ow that must be fontana di trevi above.. Wonderful :)
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 10/28/2012 2:02:00 PM
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    And on those ripples the wish is granted..Great work..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by...My work "Down Where" is now finished..Sara
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 10/28/2012 9:26:00 AM
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    Love it! To mine faves! As you would say! Jim
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 10/26/2012 8:33:00 PM
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    I'll say it....you have a lot of imagery contained in these little writes. To me it's ingenious!
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    kash poet
    Date: 10/26/2012 12:55:00 AM
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    Very nice Senryu Ruben!Enjoyed.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/25/2012 4:56:00 PM
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    I liked this one very much Ruben. It reads perfect in my mind. Thanks for sharing it. Love, Carol XXXX
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/25/2012 2:32:00 PM
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    very nice, nothing like the ripple effect!!


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