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FLESHY HEART

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FLESHY HEART

                                                       fleshy heart
                                                 feelings rise there in
                                                       mind informs

                                                      sense of pain 
                                                   pain love act react
                                                       face depicts


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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:27:00 PM

    the second stanza has six syllables as opposed to five. Other than that I really liked the imagery, it offers a good insight into heart-ache.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:23:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your concise and descriptive writing today...