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SCARED BULLET repost

A scared bullet is a friend, who gets caught and he tattle
Always acting like he'd be the first bullet out the barrel
A bullet that's brave, take things to grave like strays
A scared bullet will hit his target, and do nothing but ricochet...

By, Scribe ML

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:26:00 PM

    Very well said in one great sentence, with a scared bullet, that ricocheted.... Nice Scribe can always count on you too leave suspense... Xoxo Carma

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:59:00 PM

    Intresting and powerful image here, you have hit the bullseye with this one.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:05:00 PM

    I really like this man!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 4:01:00 PM

    This was well written i like the way you use the bullet.