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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Whats up fam...I love this piece here of course. Maybe you can answer this one for me.? Why are people afraid to comment on anything that can save them in life? Mainly God...hmmm Have you noticed that?

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 10:19:00 PM
    Incredible write of such truth! Each of us must hold onto the faith that God endowed us with to survive in the days ahead

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 1:31:00 AM
    I love the conviction you write with - it makes one pause and take note. Love the message in this poem, with so much commercialization of religion going on, it's good to remember what the real deal is. Well written!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:18:00 PM
    "Wow weeee Marlon, we perceive to b blinded, but in these words you prone to write I can see true meanings, for my god is no money down, for he is always my relation.... To my heart!!! Thank You xoxox

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:50:00 PM
    You speak deep Marlon with this one, I can tell your faith is untouchable, you seem to love God like it's nobody's business, you brought a smile to me tonight, I just hope my faith is as strong, I find great strength and example in your truthful words and quiet strength, I rejoice when I read poetry such as this, love and light, your sister in Christ, Vienna. xxxx

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:18:00 PM
    Great ending line! Nicely done, Marlon! Very nice. Ruben.