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Walking With You Tonight

 Walking With You Tonight
(poem /song)

In my dreams tonight oh, baby
I am walking with you on the clouds
Holding me tight in your arms
And I wish I will never wake up
With your warm and loving touch

We're dancing together in the starlight
As we walk together in my dreams tonight

I feel your love entirely on my being
Your tenderness and sweet caress
Getting me out from the darkness
With all the loneliness I feel
You wipe them all, my tears and fears

I am walking with you tonight
In my dreams I feel alright
You’re releasing all my pains
Allowing me to see a new sunlight
As I walk lovingly with you tonight

You’re giving me enough courage to go on
In all my hopes and dreams
I’m dancing with you baby in the starlight
As I walk with you tonight

We’re dancing together in the starlight
As we walk together in my dreams tonight.



Oct. 23,2012

Note:   Not for the contest.  (No melody yet. Trying to compose/find someone to help me)






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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:47:00 AM

    i can whistle a tune for this, that's the best i can do.. awesome poem, deserves being a song..........

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:40:00 PM

    that's a beautiful and romantic expressed poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:11:00 PM

    gosh, it's so pretty, it sure seems like it belongs in the contest, Leonora. and gosh, I did not even know you had a contest going on with YOUR busy schedule!! wow!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:49:00 AM

    another great piece from you friend Norie...two thumbs up!!! I like it!! keep it up! mwuah!!!!!!!!!!!!!(^_^)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:36:00 AM

    A wonderful piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading today Leonora. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:32:00 PM

    This is very, very beautiful, to walk with the one you love on the clouds. Thanks for sharing and good night. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:54:00 PM

    stopping by to tell you good night Sisie-pooh.... nite nite....zzzzzzzzzzz... see you in the morning...PD

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 10/23/2012 8:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    good night sisie-pooh. thank you so much for reading my song.
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:50:00 PM

    This will make a lovely song, Leonora...the ending chorus is a knockout!...Might I suggest inserting the chorus between the 2nd and 3rd verse as well? - Tim

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 10/23/2012 9:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your suggestion is highly appreciated Tim. I did right away what you've suggested. thank you so much!
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:28:00 PM

    Lovely dreaming dance, you have a way with words, passionate and romantic.

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 10/23/2012 9:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Joann.
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:16:00 PM

    hi....Leo, how are you sisie-pooh,,,, I'm glad you have something new and dreamy for me to read.... Besides your soup-mail..LOL... which I will go and read in a few minutes..I had to attack this poem first.. About your poem: Only in a dram can we dream of love the way it should be and feel... you are a dreamer of light. your song is lovely, and you sure know how hold a hand.. always...your #1 fan..xox...pd

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 10/23/2012 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much my dear sisie. This is my first time that I'm quite serious to compose a song. The other one wasn't successful with the melody, lol. Hope this one will work. Million thanks! love, Leonora, your sisie-pooh.
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:04:00 PM

    I like this very much. My goal also is to be a songwriter. But I love poetry. Best of luck to you. Michael