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Isaiah Zerbst Date: 10/26/2012 1:12:00 PM The subject of this poem is excellent but the execution leaves somewhat to be desired in my opinion. The thing that makes it difficult to read is the rough flow of words. If this flow is intended to imitate the sea, that is fine; but otherwise it would be a far superior poem if the lines shared a more common pattern of stressed syllables. I hope this is helpful; I am new to this site and I don't really know what kind of comments people want.
Vesna Kovrlija Date: 10/25/2012 12:22:00 PM An amazing poem.
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/24/2012 12:28:00 PM Joann, this is very well written - gorgeous. - oxox hug Anne-Lise :)
The Situation Date: 10/24/2012 11:43:00 AM A warm inviting journey
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/24/2012 7:25:00 AM A wonderful piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading today Joann. Love, Carol
Ruben O. Date: 10/23/2012 9:16:00 PM Wow! Super!! I love this poem, Joann! The repetition works wonderfully! Excellent! Ruben.
Russell Sivey Date: 10/23/2012 7:51:00 PM This is an enlightening write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this powerfully wondrous poem! What an exemplary piece this one is! Great Work!!
Gail Angel Doyle Date: 10/23/2012 6:36:00 PM Joann, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful articulate style of poetry. Luv, Gail
Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/23/2012 5:20:00 PM Loved the repeated line very prayer like perhaps it wishes to be a Kryielle check out the form. So nice to hear from you. Light & Love
Leo Larry Amadore Date: 10/23/2012 4:43:00 PM I enjoyed reading your poem, Joann...it was a visually pleasing trek...
Ayesha Karim Date: 10/23/2012 4:28:00 PM I love your style. Four stars and remember lowercase letters throughout your poem was a thing done by the poet Nikki Giovanni in her poems. I like that you chose to do that too...
Michael J. Falotico Date: 10/23/2012 3:34:00 PM Always a joy to read your work. Hug always Michael b
Mystic Rose Date: 10/23/2012 3:31:00 PM You paint us a beautiful picture Joann, and since beauty is in the eye of the beholder, you are part of the landscape of which you write, love and light vie
harry horsman Date: 10/23/2012 3:02:00 PM the trail i chose was to read your poems, and i am glad i did, this is lovely, Joann