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  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:49:00 PM
    As usual Debbie, excellent, you capture the moment beautifully!

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 1:23:00 AM
    Good morning, Debbie. You have inspired me to write again and I have bravely attempted a sijo (my first): "Amber".Love, Su

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Debs, that was very ambitious of you to take on sijo in a string. you ended up with a wonderful spider poem! I love how you related it all to the human spirit at the end there! Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Congratulations, Debbie! Wow! This was splendid. What a powerful ending. I have, it is hard to find anything beautiful about spiders and their webs, but this certainly was full of beauty! :) Thanks for your recent visit. I appreciate it! Hugs!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:42:00 AM
    Fantastic Poem!! Big Congratulations friend Debbie..Cheers!! :) Maria

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Well written poem.... Congratulations on your win !!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:58:00 AM
    congratulations! fantastic work!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 5:47:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Debbie

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 6:21:00 PM
    I didn't understand it, but I liked it..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Debbie this is outstanding. Congratulations o. Your 1st place win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 1:03:00 PM
    Beautifully done cher!...The next time a see a dying leaf suspended in mid-air, I'll surely think of this poem...Congrats - Tim

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Creative work that you have penned for the contest..Congrats on your first place win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 11:20:00 AM
    You've created an excellent ambiance for our loving spider congratulations on your super win xxx

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 11:05:00 AM
    I'm watching this spider and the leaf, as if it were in a have painted such a lovely image in my head!! Love it!!

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Very interesting write. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 8:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your inspired words and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 7:19:00 AM
    Great congrats on your superb win,my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 5:44:00 AM
    This took my breath away. Beautifully written and a well deserved 1st place - congrats, Debbie. (I have been absent for a while: Flu, drama and computer & telephone lines down.... I am glad I happened upon your poem during my brief visit today.) Love, Su

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 12:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your superb win, Debbie!

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 12:11:00 AM
    Congratulations and thank you for entering my competition, I enjoyed reading all the entries so much. Yours was outstanding. SuZ