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Cling

a brown and curling maple leaf hangs suspended mid-air
in the clearing by the lake, transfixed by the view and kindness 
woven within the web, it watches the gentle rain fall

within the transparent lace-like web, it curls inward
its only movement seems a solemn gesture of reverence
with its last bit of I it sighs, what better place to die

shielded from the gentle rain within the prayerful curl of sable leaf
the spider waits for the Autumn wind to tear them free, to fly..on
to see the conifers green among the forest's rise

brisk winds rent the leave from loom and upward rise the pair
a spider spinning on the sable leave of maple anchored by a strand
as we our spirits torn, are reborn, within the clutch

the center holds sound its claim nature's umbilicus, man
like the spider's leaf born flight, we seek on unknown winds to rise
gentle the breeze or harsh the Fall's feverous gale, still..we rise 

*sijo string / each stands alone but also tells a story
** you didn't say ONLY 1 sijo ;)

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:54:00 PM

    enchanting autumn melody, debiie..:) clappies to you for the super win!.. huggs!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Congrats on your win.. :-)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:19:00 AM

    I had already read this poem I think.Congratulations on your first place win!Hope you are well.I am glad that I could hear from again.If you want a copy of my book,Moonlight and Solitude,pls email me your postal address.Have a nice day!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Debie, my sleeve is full ha ha xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:44:00 PM

    beautiful piece!! congratulations on your grand win! cheers!

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:05:00 PM

    CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A SPLENDID WRITE AND WIN LUV .. SO FUN SHARING NUMBER ONE ..

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:33:00 PM

    Marvelous win for a marvelous poem, Debs. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Congratulations on a stunning poem.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:07:00 PM

    Well done Debbie. You are winning loads of honors I see. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:54:00 PM

    wow an awesome write on this poem Deb. Just getting our snow this week and had to pull out the winter jacket. Hate the thought of winter. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 1:34:00 AM

    a really interesting poem Debbie, 'sijo form' and a wonderful subject, spiders on the wind.. like this....

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Thought Provoking........Loved it......

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:56:00 AM

    HI Debbie - check your 3-mail. Kathy

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:47:00 PM

    I love how you introduce such great forms with the company of a wonderful poem. You are an original. xox Michael

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:58:00 PM

    debs, is there a typo in line three of the first one? I think maybe you left out a word after "the." Anyway, this is very nicely organized and seems to be going very well with your lovely contest theme as well!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Interesting nature description..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:47:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Debbie. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol