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Life, Death, Rebirth

Within a mother's womb life begins.
Upon death life ends on this earth.
The soul reaches heaven and rebirth.
Honorable Mention Contest: Trinity 11/08/2012

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:11:00 AM

    Oh I like this, very nice Carol does honorable mention mean you did win,,, have a blessed day Carol ;}

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:04:00 PM

    ha...I see a tickle on the bottom just for you...I've must have had been a pain in the bu++...lol.... by the way... a very strong image... congrts once again..xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:06:00 PM

    Carol... tickle tickle... with your win....pd

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:47:00 PM

    congrats on the winners list, Carol. Hope life is treating you great this week.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:35:00 PM

    Full of inspiration, dear Carol! Congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:48:00 PM

    Carol did you get earth quakes? are you west coast? Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:14:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in the "Trinity" contest - well done Carol - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:01:00 AM

    Inspring words. Great writing & thank you for your warm welcome! ? Cheers! Manon (Aka, Dark_Mistress1979)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:56:00 AM

    congrats on your win Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:37:00 AM

    Thank you all for your kind words. Love, Crol

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 11:29:00 PM

    GREATE WRITE CAROL.

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:37:00 PM

    I sure hope that there aren't umbilical cords or circumcisions in heaven - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 8:21:00 AM

    One soul goes will be replaced by another

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 10:00:00 AM

    Great job Carol giving us hope of a better place in just a few lines, have a blessed day, Carl

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:20:00 AM

    wonderful philosophy Carol, so sincere..beautiful poem...

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Thanks for sharing this with us. I feel the same way. I feel that is is but dream and death is when we wake up. lucilla

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:46:00 PM

    wonderful way of looking at life's cycle...i enjoyed this poem, glad i stopped by to read it...so few words can say so much!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:59:00 PM

    and round an round we go, getting it wrong you know, no instructions can be woe, will i get it right this time, or commit another crime, to come back again though, i've been a so n so, will my spirit ever shine, on the 7th level sublime, i just don't bloody know??? re: "Life, Death, Rebirth ...Carol brown Don Johnson

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:01:00 AM

    so true and full of wisdom. good luck in the contest.. Have a great day cory

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 1:15:00 AM

    That's beautiful..I love it!..Thanks for all your wonderful comments on my poetry. And, thanks for stopping by...Holly Moore

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:22:00 PM

    Thank you Carol for this Lovely poem with such a awesome perspective of the cycle of Life. Lancelot

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:44:00 PM

    That is wonderful way at looking at life

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:15:00 PM

    wonderfully put thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:31:00 PM

    I like your poem entry for Debbie's contest. Are we supposed to use the words? I just used the ideas she mentioned, but not the words.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:27:00 PM

    It is always a joy to stop by and read your writings. few words and a world for few. Blessings.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:20:00 PM

    Short but sweet like the author! ;) Light & Love [never any need for my name on your work hon..nor any of the other stuff;) of course if you want it there okies]

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Winner for sure...Great job..The rebirth will be a much better body that won't need repair..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:03:00 PM

    ALWAYS SUNSHINE IN YOUR DELIGHTFUL COMMENTS CAROL AND IN THESE THOUGHT PROVOKING LINES OF DEPTH MY FRIEND .. KUDOS ..

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:41:00 PM

    I agree with you. I too believe so. Good luck. Loved always, bl

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