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A New Wrinkle I

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:31:00 PM

    HMMMMMMMMMMM :) getting older..

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Oh my.......I laugh at Deb's comment.....(she can't help herself!)......but who cares if its a true senryu or the blues inyou....I'll say amen to you....and keep it on my poetic menu! Loved it!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 7:20:00 PM

    Those dern things are popping up everywhere in my mirror...fun one, Rubes. Try the Acme Wrinkle Cream...Yosemite Sam used it! hahah

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:42:00 AM

    I can't figure out how my mirror broke.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:22:00 PM

    Boy, and don't we hate seeing THAT in the mirror!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:21:00 PM

    ;) I see what you're saying... I wonder what our Bet would say to... "a new wrinkle / NOW frowns" I like how you're playing. DON'T STOP

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:48:00 PM

    okies my heart...why the -- senryu do not include a kireji or verbal caesura (cutting word), and the word [image gives no image] what were you trying to get across? frowns make wrinkles..okies..I think you can do better Mr. O..I know you can! Light & Love

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 10/23/2012 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ouch! ...and not even a hmmmm!
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:10:00 PM

    What a powerful short piece. Well done my poet friend. Michael

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:50:00 PM

    Not many words but they say a lot,.thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Erich

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:04:00 PM

    you said it in nine, and told a wonderful story.. this is so clever......

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Wrinkles..OMG! hehe

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:20:00 PM

    i would much rather see you smiling, but this is a good senryu. Good to see you writing new poems.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:50:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry today Ruben. Post more please as I enjoy your writings. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:32:00 PM

    LOl, love it, but hate it when it happens. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 10:25:00 AM

    Well said Ruben - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:05:00 AM

    i can so relate to this one! you've said so much in so few words - nice!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:49:00 AM

    nice thought Ruben