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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:37:00 PM
    wow..that is ruthless, i can think of a few poets... I can hand this poem too... I love the point your attacking on this poem..Why Cyndi,, never would I expect a poem like this from you, raw from the heart. I love the emotions you used when writing this poem... ha...more I love the way, you left a comment on my poem out of the blue. Good going if you would have never commented on my poem, nothing would have brought me down here to read this bundle of joy and integrity of yours. xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:41:00 PM
    This is indeed one that goes straight into my fav list,Cyndi! A true pleasure to read such excellent work.I like the message I read from the poem,honesty right from your very heart and soul;-) hugs and love to ya`~Arild (keep up the spirit!)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:25:00 PM
    You ride the wind Cyndi, your emotions, the disappointment and scorn all surrendered with pointed ridicule and rightly so. Howmuch of this permeatesour lives so that confusion seems to reign. A wow verse to challenge the mind! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:57:00 AM
    A passionate verse...wonderfully written. Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:25:00 PM! Too many wonderful lines, Cyndi! "[...]words filled with whys/ that scattered a soft, rainy season/ to the oblivious winds."...Im going to fav this beauty.

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    Date: 10/22/2012 8:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    How you doing? : )