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your forget-me-not smile

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your forget-me-not smile


building a nest now
with your forget-me-not smile
dream bird of my mind
flying too close to you now
to capture those rainbow smiles

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Contest:Tanka the Pivot

Date:22nd October 2012


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  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:24:00 AM
    Ahhh!!So romantic and expressive ...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always appreciated..Sara

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:22:00 PM
    Nice way to think of the person you love with forget me not smiles. Lovely poem Kash. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:32:00 AM
    Very beautiful. I like it Your forget me not smile. Thanks for sharing. I went to the woods and found a rock, with three little words. Forget me not. Many blessings, Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:47:00 AM
    A superb entry for the contest Kash. I am sure it will do well. Mahalo for your help. Blessings

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:48:00 PM
    AGAIN A FABULOUS EXPRESSION OF EMOTION KASH WITH AN AMAZING PIVOT LINE .. WINNING WISHES TO U ALWAYS ..

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:43:00 PM
    trying to figure Joy's rules out have contacted her yes I will start! HUGS L & L ma

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:20:00 PM
    I really love this poem, Kash.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:56:00 AM
    Please be 1 of my five in the present giving Xmas contest Joy is running? Let me know if you can? Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:26:00 AM
    yoohoo... anything new form your magical quill?.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:28:00 AM
    you are a romantic, kashi... wow, this is defining in flow and content..:) hugggs a lot, bud!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Awww, this is just too sweet!!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:26:00 PM
    like this Kash, awesome poem, and love the title...

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:18:00 PM
    well..there are all kinds of birds aye? and nests..Light & Love

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    Date: 10/23/2012 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And all kind of smiles also........
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:19:00 PM
    Like a wing in flight is this verse Kash, wonderful entry for the contest!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:02:00 AM
    Beautiful and a great entry! Your words are treasures here..."building a nest with your forget-me-not smile...". How wonderful to think of someone in such an endearing way. Ahh! Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:13:00 AM
    This is great and so lovely poem, Kash. This is a winner for me! Good luck always! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Beautiful write, Kash, very nice!!jag

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:31:00 AM
    An enchanting Tanka with elegant use of metaphors. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my Tanka Unexhausted Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:14:00 AM
    Kash, ENTER it. Suzette told me in FB that even though she has left Soup, she plans to judge her contest!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:57:00 PM
    I'm discovering the charms of tanka with Debbie Guzzi right now and this one of yours will definitely convince me to use it! So sweet! Thanks a lot!:) Hanitra

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