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your forget-me-not smile


building a nest now
with your forget-me-not smile
dream bird of my mind
flying too close to you now
to capture those rainbow smiles

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Contest:Tanka the Pivot

Date:22nd October 2012



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  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Ahhh!!So romantic and expressive ...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always appreciated..Sara

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:22:00 PM

    Nice way to think of the person you love with forget me not smiles. Lovely poem Kash. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Very beautiful. I like it Your forget me not smile. Thanks for sharing. I went to the woods and found a rock, with three little words. Forget me not. Many blessings, Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:47:00 AM

    A superb entry for the contest Kash. I am sure it will do well. Mahalo for your help. Blessings

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:48:00 PM

    AGAIN A FABULOUS EXPRESSION OF EMOTION KASH WITH AN AMAZING PIVOT LINE .. WINNING WISHES TO U ALWAYS ..

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:43:00 PM

    trying to figure Joy's rules out have contacted her yes I will start! HUGS L & L ma

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:20:00 PM

    I really love this poem, Kash.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:56:00 AM

    Please be 1 of my five in the present giving Xmas contest Joy is running? Let me know if you can? Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:26:00 AM

    yoohoo... anything new form your magical quill?.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:28:00 AM

    you are a romantic, kashi... wow, this is defining in flow and content..:) hugggs a lot, bud!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:14:00 AM

    Awww, this is just too sweet!!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:26:00 PM

    like this Kash, awesome poem, and love the title...

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:18:00 PM

    well..there are all kinds of birds aye? and nests..Light & Love

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 10/23/2012 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And all kind of smiles also........
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Like a wing in flight is this verse Kash, wonderful entry for the contest!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:02:00 AM

    Beautiful and a great entry! Your words are treasures here..."building a nest with your forget-me-not smile...". How wonderful to think of someone in such an endearing way. Ahh! Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:13:00 AM

    This is great and so lovely poem, Kash. This is a winner for me! Good luck always! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:10:00 AM

    Beautiful write, Kash, very nice!!jag

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:31:00 AM

    An enchanting Tanka with elegant use of metaphors. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my Tanka Unexhausted Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:14:00 AM

    Kash, ENTER it. Suzette told me in FB that even though she has left Soup, she plans to judge her contest!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:57:00 PM

    I'm discovering the charms of tanka with Debbie Guzzi right now and this one of yours will definitely convince me to use it! So sweet! Thanks a lot!:) Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:59:00 PM

    sad and beautiful, Kashinath. Is it for one of the contests? let me check out that thing you told me in soupmail now!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:30:00 PM

    A smile to remember is always a sure way to say, 'Forget me not'! Beautiful little Rhyme, Kash. Hope you're well. Annalise

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 4:03:00 PM

    This is beautiful my friend, quite the gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly delightful poem this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:56:00 PM

    :-( Kash, It is one of them days...I can't seem to find the rainbow smiles.... always...pd

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:13:00 PM

    Amazing written - deep thoughts between the lines Kash. - - - ( "king of Haiku" can you be so kind and read mine - I am in the learning stage :) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)