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Incubus

Arms spread; you were nailed to the living room wall
Struck dumb; I could not heed your faint, pleading call


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  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:15:00 PM

    riveting piece , tom... beautiful work and good show of strong emotion...:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 4:24:00 AM

    Very well penned and many congrats, belated though, on your win!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:37:00 PM

    i like this you should read feed upon my soul its also kown as succubus 5stars

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Very nice Tim!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 8:01:00 AM

    glad i've seen this wonderful poem, and congrats for your placement in Deb's contest...

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:18:00 PM

    TIM, CONGRATULATIONS IN DEBBIE'S Two Timer's"" CONTEST... ALWAYS~ pd

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem Tim - oxox big hug to you - // Anne-Lise <@<@<@<@<

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Tim! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem Tim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win xx

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:23:00 AM

    congratulations on your win friend Tim :) cheers!!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:59:00 AM

    Beautiful Tim. Many congrats for this win luv.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:16:00 PM

    CONGRATS TIM ON A DYNAMIC WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 6:18:00 PM

    Well you my fine friend are not one for a woman who is faint of heart [how did you know my fantasy?? ;)] Congrad's on your big win! Cher Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 6:18:00 PM

    Congratulations on a winning two line poem.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Hi Tim, wow..this image is scary... good luck...pd

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:30:00 PM

    oooh, a good one for a Halloween entry too!! congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 10:59:00 AM

    By jove I think you've got it!! HUZZAH Light & Love