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sun rises

the sun rises
through rough, bare branches
as the ice melts . . .
limbs quiver the covers 
in your embrace





4/5/4  6/4


12.07.2012

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  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:20:00 PM

    i dont get around much now a days, but when i do and find something as good as this, i just wish i could borrow more time,, this is amazingly visual, love how you bring the two aspects together....

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:54:00 PM

    This tanka appears to be a bit lonely(in the comments section :D)....I want to slide under those covers to warm up. Lovely romantic theme here, starting with the more objective beginning that merges nicely with the second part, painting an imagery-filled tanka-scene.