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  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:20:00 PM
    i dont get around much now a days, but when i do and find something as good as this, i just wish i could borrow more time,, this is amazingly visual, love how you bring the two aspects together....

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:54:00 PM
    This tanka appears to be a bit lonely(in the comments section :D)....I want to slide under those covers to warm up. Lovely romantic theme here, starting with the more objective beginning that merges nicely with the second part, painting an imagery-filled tanka-scene.