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Haiku - X 5 - Demon

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Haiku - X 5 - Demon



                                        Blood dripping demon
                                 I can hear scraping under my bed
                                            My heart stops












21.10.2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 12:23:00 PM

    The monster under the bed! Creepy, but I really like it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Anne, I keep going back to this one to. High drama value, great write Rollo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/9/2012 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are always welcome Rollo. - Thank you. Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:36:00 PM

    I love this Anne ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/5/2012 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:29:00 PM

    Great Haiku Anne Lise--a fun one!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/3/2012 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 9:54:00 PM

    Excellent piece,Anne Lise....Great job...and my heart stops. Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2012 2:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations,and comments - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:14:00 PM

    Anne, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/1/2012 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, PD - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 3:53:00 PM

    OoooOOooo...Spooky,spooky! With only a few words.. Very nice. :o) B00 oOOooOOooOoo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2012 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Dan. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 9:26:00 AM

    Hi Anne Lise, Scary poem. Probably every adult can remember that as a child they believed that something scary lived under his or her bed. I know I did. I never let my foot dangle over the edge of the bed when I was young. You never know. Thanks for commenting on my poem., Who Am I. Much appreciated. I haven't been on Soup for several years. I joined back in 2007. I look forward to reading more of your work. All best, Orma Faye

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2012 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I often looked under the bed, I also as a child .... lol... Thanks for your visit and nice comments, welcome back. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 5:47:00 PM

    Oh Geeze..why did I read this before bed? lol. Congrats. BG

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2012 1:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Barbara - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:45:00 PM

    Dear Anne Lise, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit I can relate to this masterful Haiku. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM Lonely Heart LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Harry - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Esquire Avatar HGarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 10/30/2012 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congratulations on YOUR Contest Win...HG
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:38:00 PM

    ooooh! This is really scary, Anne Lise! Congrats on your fabulous win. Love, Annalise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Annalise - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:59:00 PM

    another one I really like!! congrats for the win.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Andrea - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Big Congratulations to you my friend Anne Lise for winning Tracie’s “”Spooky Ku” contest. I'm scared that he is also under my bed tonight. lol!Happy Halloween!(^_^) hugs! Maria

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Maria - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 10:07:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Anne..........

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Joseph - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Anne, Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Love always, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Gail - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:10:00 AM

    My biggest congratulations with biggest hugs on your win my dear friend, Anne-Lise! I'm so happy to see you on the winner's list! Best wishes and luck always! love, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Leonora- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 6:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Anne Lise BOOOO. Love, Carol

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your spooky ku win Anne Lise xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Mandy - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 12:31:00 AM

    SUPER CONGRATS ANNE-LISE ON A TREMENDOUS SPOOKY KU WRITE AND WIN LUV FILLED WITH HALLOWEEN FLAVOR LUV ..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/30/2012 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 4:22:00 PM

    Great poem for halloween

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/28/2012 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Very scarey!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/28/2012 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:55:00 PM

    That would make anyones heart drop and stop. ha ha love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/27/2012 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh .... just a little mouse .... they're so cute :) Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/27/2012 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Phyllis,thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 12:52:00 PM

    It's a little mouse! : ) Good luck in Tracie's contest, Anne Lise! Ruben.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/27/2012 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh .... just a little mouse .... they're so cute :) Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 12:33:00 AM

    here's to wonderful saturday filled with a garden of glow, anne..:) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/27/2012 3:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 4:05:00 PM

    Wow! This is really scary. I like it, I like it, Jancarl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 2:50:00 PM

    Anne you've surprised me with this piece...Scary-ku's..nice work and thanks for sharing!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX and my blog - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 1:58:00 PM

    A scary Halloween poemm thanks for sahring it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:44:00 AM

    A chilling haiku, Anne Lise. Very timely for Halloween indeed. Thanks for passing by my poem with your kind words.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:46:00 PM

    Oh iam scared..lol..nice write Anne.Its always pleasure reading your lovely lovely poem :)Hugs,Watisungla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:28:00 PM

    And now your dead. Could have been your next line if, well if we didn't have to adhere to these rigid stylistic guide lines. :) Thanks for stopping by. XXX, I was hoping for something a little more racy. :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 2:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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