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Dry lands embrace

Thinking of love as I stare at the stream
Feeling lost as I am wet with my dream
Knowing she is dry far,far away
Shall I dive in or let my pain stay
I put my faith in the flowing river
The cold of rejection makes my body shiver
If I enter what doubts will befall me to collide
Will drown forever with the deep feelings tide
I leap in and dive down to the emotion of her depth
I struggle to find her I only have one breath
I fight for life and it’s worth the work 
But I’m overcome and caught deep in fates murk
I try to twist off depression so I could break free
Then I felt her warm hand of our destiny
She pulls me out and leads me to loves place
I shall stay away from the river and live 
In her dry lands embrace


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  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:12:00 AM

    Nice metaphor..using safety, safe harbour as both love and dry land..Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:34:00 AM

    It's a beautiful poem! I love the connection between the feeling of drowning and the emotions and dispair... and then the rescue, the hope. AWESOME! :D

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Love the last line. Lovely words. Seren