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Jazz Man

JAZZ MAN

Lips of sweat,
Igniting catalyst tune as they burn out, 
Crossed eyes, attention spreads
feeling the whiteness in pure magic.
Each memo confronts the other, 
Soul cord of depth, 
and for one short-lived moment.
Losing sight of reality in a stasis of oasis.
The passionate barb stick notes directly into the atmosphere.
Each message is a flood of scheme, 
singing the blues, this smooth criminal
angel of birth, in your hands
luring you to a road in heaven.
The lights are all you feel; 
you can see the forgotten masterpiece.
Bathing in it, as the drums go on, 
the mob gathers, to feel the whiteness of the trumpet.
He is rotating his saxophone, 
making love to the crowd.
His horn come with words that deepens the soul,
the crowd is mesmerized.
He extends his hands,
A standing ovation,
Slamming and whistling,
Louder than thunder,
Mr. Jazz man is done
With no condom at all……………………….

by;pd

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 7:44:00 PM

    But what a moment

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 5:15:00 AM

    A excellent tribute to a most loved music style. From line to line the words excelled like musical notes.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 1:30:00 PM

    WOW! You pick the most interesting titles. I love jazz and you have really brought it to life with this poem. Awesome job! :)

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:20:00 PM

    This really put me in the moment. Has a be-bop kind of flow in the words. Very nicely done. Thank you for the kind words on my poem by the way.

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 1:31:00 AM

    Hi PD never been a big Jazz fan but maybe after reading this I should take another look, wonderful like it immensely, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:49:00 PM

    Love the ending , no condom at all ;} I also love jazz There was a station here called " Smooth Jazz" about 10 yrs, they stopped ,cuz not enough listeners, they said. Though they still have the "Smooth Jazz cruise ;} have a great New Years Poet ;}

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 11:50:00 PM

    You had me with your title... I love Jazz, and this depiction is raw, visceral and steamy! Each word is essential, the whole is truly phenomenal! Awesome!!! Love, Keith and... Happy Holidays to you too!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:41:00 PM

    I like this one P.D, then again the "jazz" gets me goin too, still cant seem to enter anything anywhere it wont bring up my poems, maybe im just not good with puters, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:28:00 AM

    i liked this one alot nice job :-) i gave u a 7

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 7:14:00 PM

    Seeing this one again. It's a really nice one, PD. I wanted to say thanks to you for seeing my blog the other day as well. LUv,Andrea

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 7:15:00 AM

    hello.Happy New Year! I'm really keen on poetry!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 7:41:00 PM

    Another great poem.When I read your poems I smile.Ridiculously good and entertaining.It's just great.Ready for more

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:44:00 PM

    7 is the highest rating they allowed me... Okay, where to begin? I cannot use the words I want to say about this piece. The first one is Holy, the next begins with F and last begins with S... Absolutely GENIUS! The flow, the imagery, the raw realness of it all... Everything was so far beyond "good" that no comment I could make will do this justice. I have missed your work so much! I come back and this is what I find? It may take my best work to even begin to praise this piece properly. I love it

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 12:37:00 PM

    A remarkable poem with amazing picturization of a jazz artist. Nevertheless, I had to rub my eyes over the last line. Thanks for your enchanting comment on my Tanka Naive Heart, Linda. Am I again day dreaming or you really wrote 'young heart'? Love and best wishes. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:11:00 PM

    Poet Destroyer, awesome portrayal of the come on a jazz artist has, love the shocking end line but it is so true.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 11:44:00 AM

    What an amazing piece to read. I enjoyed every single word and the conclusion is effectively shocking (in a good way of course). Very nice free flowing poem. -- Sean

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:01:00 PM

    Hi PD, read this and gotta say it wasnt what i expected, it was much more, very well penned, very sexy, grabbed me by the throat it did, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:22:00 AM

    Hello my dear sisie-pooh! I read again this great poem of yours before finally signing off and go to bed. Take care and God bless you and your family always! Good night! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 12:11:00 AM

    simply wonderful...

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:11:00 PM

    Actually I already adored this writes long moments ago, but still speechless in words, this is the sexiest Mr. Jazz man which led me to a wild strain, thank you for your kindly visit to my page, those comments encourage me a lot :) - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Congrats PD on your win, great write.

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:26:00 AM

    Love this PD!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:14:00 AM

    a true clear view in optima forma. R e a l l y like it! Felicitations. Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 2:40:00 PM

    A passionate piece, PD! Lots of feeling in this. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 7:05:00 AM

    congratulations on your win friend Andrea..superb write!! i like it.. have a good day always. Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in this contest P.D.... Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:49:00 PM

    Wonderful and splendid write,PD.This is a master piece...Ride on pal..I love this-You painted the real picture of a Jazz man..Kudos to you..Big congrats on your super win...XOXO...

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:47:00 PM

    CONGRATS PD MY BFF ..KNEW THIS WAS A WINNER FIRST TIME I READ IT LUV .. AS ALWAYS .. AWESOME .. WE R STILL ON CLEAN UP DUTY FROM HURRICANE TRYING TO HELP OUT IN NORTH JERSEY HIT VERY HARD ..STILL NO POWER FOR MANY ..BFF FOR ETERNITY..

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 1:16:00 PM

    yea meeeeeeeee...

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 9:09:00 AM

    congrats on your win with this great write PD

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