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Mokista springs, Aitoloakarnania

                             
Gurgling serenade
tirelessly sung by the water
to the plane trees.
                
Gurgling serenade.
My soul has become a note
in  that Divine song.

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  1. Squyres Avatar
    Debra Squyres
    Date: 3/12/2013 1:43:00 PM
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    Enjoyed both of these verses...I can hear the gurgling of a stream and can easily become a part of it.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/29/2012 9:04:00 AM
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    Yes of course you amy post this in your blog ;) [soft thick moss/covers the fallen trunk --drizzle falls] above I will try to assist you..in making the verses more haiku-like..[do not use personification ;)]think subject/action - surprise, as you begin to learn the form[a gurgling brook/flows through the green woodlands -- waterbugs leap] speaking of soul is best left for another form, soul is subjective and not objective BUT let's try and get the geist of your content into a haiku like form

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/29/2012 9:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    [my heart beats/to the water's rhythm- bird song] this would show man joined with nature
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    Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 12/29/2012 3:44:00 AM
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    Beautiful writing! Fresh as the waters of the Spring. Thank you Mr. Comporozos for your comment on my poem 'TIME'. Yes, by all means you may present my poem on your blog, provided you make the autor of the poem known to your readers with (C). Are you from Aitolokarnania? I AM! Hope to hear from you again.
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/6/2012 12:23:00 AM
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    A marvelous verse to the songs of nature. I could almost hear the waters gurgling. This is a very heavenly piece. Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos Date: 11/6/2012 12:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very very much, Laura, for your words!
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 10/31/2012 11:41:00 AM
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    Great haiku,Vassilis.Take Care,Arild

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos Date: 11/6/2012 12:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Arild!
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 10/30/2012 12:57:00 PM
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    Hi Vassilis thanks for your comment earlier, this is a great haiku my friend, all the best Owen
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 10/21/2012 3:05:00 PM
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    Lovely Haiku - well done. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

    Comporozos Avatar Vassilis Comporozos Date: 10/23/2012 1:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot, Anne-Lise!


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