Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

Etchings

hoarfrost coats the grass
etching it 
like acid on a metal plate
defeating the
morning glories 


*10/20/12

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:49:00 PM

    Hello Lady, , :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Debbie, I love to see a hoar frost xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Wonderful write,Debbie.Congratulations on your win ....Kudos to you.....

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:05:00 PM

    Debbie, Congrats on your well deserved first in Joann’s contest!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 4:43:00 AM

    Congrats on a top win with this lovely Gogyoka, Debbie! loved the parallels drawn.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 9:41:00 PM

    This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Deb.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:46:00 PM

    Congrats. Debbie on your super win, great poem, hugs vie

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:15:00 PM

    congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:06:00 PM

    marvelous one, Debs, well deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:50:00 PM

    Soon and very soon it will be here..It is in the upper fourties now at night..I thought that I had read this one before but I guess I had not..Creative and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:26:00 AM

    SOUL MAIL, DEB!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 7:53:00 PM

    This is another awesome poem of yours I've read today my dear great poet friend, Deb. All the best and luck always! hugs:) LG

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Sensational, Debbie. I'd say more but it's all in the poem. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 5:52:00 AM

    It shining of your beautiful poems also Debbie. Winter is too long and cold ..... Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:47:00 AM

    yes indeed Debbie, any resistance from the late bloomers, usually fall at the first frost.. love the way you have constructed this wonderful little verse.. love the Title also...

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 9:45:00 PM

    I hate that frost...it attacks all my flowers and leave them weeping...Thanks for reading and comments made. Really enjoy your writes. One love. Joy wells

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 6:34:00 PM

    cold season,chilly write Debbie lol