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Haiku - X4 - Heart


                                         A heart
                            learning language of love
                                    but also grief

                                       The grief
                            learning heart to go uphill
                                    death is heavy











20.10.2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:28:00 AM

    learning the language of love is quite a laborious process. Enjoyed!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/31/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kyle,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:41:00 PM

    I like it Anne ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/5/2012 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 3:48:00 PM

    Oh....This one is heart heavy! <3

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2012 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dan,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:57:00 PM

    So true on this haiku sort of sad too. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/27/2012 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Phyllis,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 4:04:00 PM

    very interesting, but a bit sad Jancarl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jancarl,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:31:00 PM

    Yes, the human condition doesn't allow one without the other. Hears hoping your load is light.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 2:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Robert,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:53:00 AM

    deep haiku Anne.....best wishes....love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joseph,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:07:00 AM

    A profound write by you here Anne.Enjoyed the read.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kash,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:31:00 PM

    Beautiful haiku, Anne.Enjoyed reading it.Hugs, Watisungla :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2012 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Awesome combination of haiku. So glad to read your poems today.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/24/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:59:00 PM

    So profound my dear Anne Wonderful. You are now the queen of Haiku!! Luv n hugs Michael

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/24/2012 1:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Really marvelous and heart touching coz you have touched very deeply the side effects of love and grief. Thanks for giving time to read my write. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 10:48:00 AM

    wonderful, yes Anne it seems we have to learn both, love and grief,, love how you constructed this...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:18:00 AM

    A really deep haiku to dig into it and discover things

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2012 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 3:11:00 PM

    I enjoyed your haiku set here, sweetie. How is it going today?

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's been a nice autumn day Andrea. - Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2012 1:46:00 PM

    pithy and profound, still thinking.......well done. Blessings.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:32:00 AM

    You know what? You are right. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:41:00 AM

    so true...death is heavy...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:34:00 PM

    I couldn't agree more with these 2 haikus. Fantastic job!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 1:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:50:00 PM

    Anne, your haiku, runs deep... does not matter if you are not a master... you hit a deep note with both haikus... grief is , bad when love is gone... xox~pd

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    But fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:04:00 PM

    ‡ I Love The Feeling Along Side The Tone I Find Within This, Beautiful Short Yet Splendid Verse, Sweet Beautiful Anne Lise. Not Certain If This Corresponds With Any Thoughts Here, Beautiful Girl, But I Have Been Trying To Slay Mrs. Hyde For Years Now ? Yet I Feel For Her So I Might Let Her Hang Around Until I Relocate; Poor Girl, LOL. Beautiful Poem, Truly, And Thank You For Your Precious Loving Hearts Lovely Visit. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:08:00 AM

    These are two very powerful and awesome haikus my dear friend, Anne-Lise! I love it/them! They'll really move the reader's feeling, just like mine. Thank you so much for sharing and especially for your very inspiring comments on my latest poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled time/day always in sunshine! love and hugs:) Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 10:08:00 AM

    Lif's has its ups and downs, that's a heartfelt expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it,God bles you. Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry: Erich.
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 8:14:00 AM

    Anne-Lise I like the inversion in these, it is very thought provoking, well done...David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry: David.
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 8:05:00 AM

    Good write... It works very well! It leaves us lingering with images... PS. I've been busy with the Trolls and friends again... your friend.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry: Carol
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:48:00 AM

    You are doing well Anne-Lise. I am still learning too, after 10 years of studying. The fastest way to learn is just to keep reading. Soupmail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for S-mail Connie. -I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:35:00 AM

    thought provoking haiku, my friend

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:34:00 AM

    Thought provoking! ... I think senryu but I could be wrong. (watch for mail) Cynthia

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for S-mail - I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Cynthia. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 5:55:00 AM

    So many emotions our heart experiences. Great insight, Anne-Lise. Make us think. Love ya, Toquyen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 5:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 4:02:00 AM

    Gosh does this sound familiar..so true. Thanks for your comment on my Haiku..Hugs to you. Holly Moore

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
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