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On Higher Levels: Journey To The Climax

I. You dream of making love while flying. Visions manifest in Wings and Talons wrapped around a rainbow heart in orbital light -- I leave all reason, dissolve, become my imprint: the Black Bird of the South II. Like the rays of the morning Sun penetrate a winter-coat, Your touch warms my skin: flames lap up the cold within. III. I close my eyes, drift into dreams . . . Only for a moment -- pupils dilate Red behind my eyelids -- open, shut, open, shut, Open Light reflexes hesitate, turn into a prelude of pulsating waves, fluttering hands, fingers touching, wreathing as vapours rise between our tongues; tenderly writhing from within, from without. Lust and Love become one The Woman I am surrenders completely, willingly to the Man You are. Swelling, quivering in the humid slide of our bodies Every thrust fills me as you quicken in the deep, catch my breath -- Hearts race to an ancient beat, the Ancient Beast: Our naked soul within our naked flesh -- We rise and fall until we clasp in a single moan Oh God . . . ! We rush -- inside-out gushing . . . gushing . . . Until we slowly fade to a constant, throbbing flow . . . Growing, cradling, breathing an eternal Afterglow 08/07/2012

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 12:58:00 AM

    OH! G___! DA--***$)I'm Holding on ...my feet stomping up and down...heart pounding!!!!WOW WOW WOW WOW WOOOOH! GEEZ GAL!!!Cold Shower hell...I'm headed naked for the SNOW! I didn't know ...I honestly didn't know... there were another ROSIE in this world! (ROSIE was my first love...she'd waste me...Holding back tears...secretly thinking "I might never walk again") but with a hint of her devilish little grin behind the faked pain... ha ha...ah ...you gals are just too... 'Beautifully'... much.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:38:00 PM

    Wot can I type here that I haven't already mentioned about this poem?(especially without being too naughty and all). Ssssssssteamy....

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:23:00 PM

    A beautiful lovemaking scene! You've captured a picture of passion! Some flames aren't meant to be put out!

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:08:00 PM

    ‡ Wow, I Can Clearly See That Your Amazing Gifted Beauty Described This Incredible Moment From A Females Perspective In Re The Magical Climaxic Moment; Poor Guys, LOL. I Love How That Your Brilliant Passion Soaked Poetic Brush Became As That A Maestro In Building Unto A Crescendo Of Pure Joy And Splendour, Sweet Beautiful Christine. I Would Favour This Treasure But Tis Out Of My League, LOL. Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful. My Love, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:01:00 PM

    One of the best poems I have ever read