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Luna

Luna~~lu~nes~~ta~~luna
I am sooo in love with you
Each and ever~~y night


Sleepwalk, ~~all I do is sleepwalk
~~~

Lu~~nes~~ta~~luna~~luna
I am sooo in love with you
When I sleep~at night  

Every night, all alone with you in mind
Every night I'm dreaming of  you alone
Luna~~lu~~nest~~a~luna
As you float on by dreaming dear of you to night
Sleepwalk all I do is 
Sleepwalk
All I do is sleepwalk
Without you
I'm dreaming of you
I'm dreaming of you 
I'm dreaming of you
I'm loving you, loving you 
Luna, lu~~nest~~a~~luna
That blue pill 
I'm in love with you
I'm so in love with you 
I'm so in love with you

Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Contest: Sleepwalk
Chose Ventures as my music guide..
Finis October 21, 2012
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/2/2012 4:30:00 AM
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    ‡ Returning, To A Treasure, Placed Perfectly In Centre Upon The Gallery's Wall, Sweet Beautiful Sara. Wishing You A Wonderful, Filled With Beauty And Love. May Your Paths Be Gentle, As Your Heart Caressed. My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 10/26/2012 5:19:00 PM
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    * "SWEET KISSES AS SWEET DREAMS, 'BEAUTIFUL SARA, DIPPED IN LOVE,'" RACHEL *
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    Wolf Lief
    Date: 10/24/2012 11:18:00 AM
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    very nice pice here 4 1/2 stars hope to read more of your work soon
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 10/22/2012 4:23:00 PM
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    * I'm In Love With You. I'm So In Love With You. I'm So In Love With You!' Did I Mention Unto Your Endless Beauty Yesterday, How Very Spellbinding Seems This Echoing Within One's Heart's Poem, Sweet Beautiful Sara. The Very Words Quoted As Drawn From Your Majestic Beauty's Masterpiece, Floated Through My Mind, Many Times Today ~ Sweet Kisses To You, Dipped In Love, Rachel *
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 10/22/2012 6:47:00 AM
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    Very creative work it read like a winner Sara, so glad I stopped in I would have missed a great write, have a great day, love vie
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 10/21/2012 9:23:00 PM
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    Thanks for the info on this pill Sara..once when I was back home in Ja, I was going through some stuff and couldn't sleep, so the doc gave me something similar so I could sleep, the problem was though, my son came home from his after-school work and knock the doors and windows down and I didn't hear a thing, he had to sleep on the front porch, when I woke and realize what happened I toss the darn things down the toilet and that was the end of it. I know what you mean.they are not good!
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 10/21/2012 6:54:00 PM
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    ‡ I Wished To Return Unto This Fragrant Moment, Sweet Beautiful Sara. Because It Is 'Sooo Mesmerizing. Sooo Beautiful.' Sweet Dreams To You. My Love, Rachel ‡
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 10/21/2012 2:35:00 PM
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    ‡ Your Beautiful Words Whisper Deeply Into My Soul And Mesmerize My Eyes, Sweet Beautiful Sara. Twas A Favourite To Be Cherished Afore. Twice As Beautiful, Now. My Love, Rachel ‡
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 10/21/2012 1:39:00 PM
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    ‡ Wow, Sweet Beautiful Sara, My Eyes Cannot Recollect Ever Beholding Such Beautiful Emotion Nor Passion, Dripping From Your Lovely Brush. The Intensity Is Penetrating Within The Most Beautiful Of Sweet Lights. Precious Luna I Am Certain Would Be But Overwhelmed And Joyful To Find Such Beautiful Loving Words Brushing, Her Celestials Heart. A Beautiful Magical Mesmerizing, Treasure In Faves. Sweet Kisses To You, Rachel ‡
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    Vesna Kovrlija
    Date: 10/21/2012 10:50:00 AM
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    I love the moon and your poem too.
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    jack horne
    Date: 10/21/2012 6:27:00 AM
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    lovely lyrical write indeed, my friend - I can't return Soupmail at the moment (System 500 error). congrats on all your wins : )
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 10/21/2012 3:09:00 AM
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    your lines make me sing...luna is a word i like -- so mysterious, romantic, sara.. will vome back to see it unravel... lovely..;) huggs!
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    Justin Bordner
    Date: 10/20/2012 11:23:00 PM
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    N A as L U as Luna - I love the moon and all of it's inherent mystery & beauty, so in my bias for Her I think this lyric is a delight Sara - I really like the sleep walk emphasis - and lu nes ta is so elegant - J.A.B. %
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    Sandy Ivy D
    Date: 10/20/2012 4:11:00 PM
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    The love this moon you write about "sandy
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    The Situation
    Date: 10/20/2012 1:40:00 PM
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    This must be a song!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/20/2012 1:05:00 PM
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    aweee.. Sara, now I'm in love with the moon... sweet....pd
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    kash poet
    Date: 10/20/2012 11:05:00 AM
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    A beautiful poem in progress.....will come back.


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