Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Luna

Sara Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Luna which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Sara Kendrick

Best Sara Kendrick Poems

+ Fav Poet

Poet's Notes About The Poem
(Show Details...)

There is a sleeping pill that by prescripton only called "Lunesta"..
It is addictive and causing sleepwalking in some people..It's effect is worse on older people..This song is a play off on that medicine..It is very dangerous when improperly taken..


Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem.

Luna

Luna~~lu~nes~~ta~~luna
I am sooo in love with you
Each and ever~~y night


Sleepwalk, ~~all I do is sleepwalk
~~~

Lu~~nes~~ta~~luna~~luna
I am sooo in love with you
When I sleep~at night  

Every night, all alone with you in mind
Every night I'm dreaming of  you alone
Luna~~lu~~nest~~a~luna
As you float on by dreaming dear of you to night
Sleepwalk all I do is 
Sleepwalk
All I do is sleepwalk
Without you
I'm dreaming of you
I'm dreaming of you 
I'm dreaming of you
I'm loving you, loving you 
Luna, lu~~nest~~a~~luna
That blue pill 
I'm in love with you
I'm so in love with you 
I'm so in love with you

Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Contest: Sleepwalk
Chose Ventures as my music guide..
Finis October 21, 2012
Click on " About This Poem"

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:18:00 AM
    very nice pice here 4 1/2 stars hope to read more of your work soon

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 6:47:00 AM
    Very creative work it read like a winner Sara, so glad I stopped in I would have missed a great write, have a great day, love vie

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 9:23:00 PM
    Thanks for the info on this pill Sara..once when I was back home in Ja, I was going through some stuff and couldn't sleep, so the doc gave me something similar so I could sleep, the problem was though, my son came home from his after-school work and knock the doors and windows down and I didn't hear a thing, he had to sleep on the front porch, when I woke and realize what happened I toss the darn things down the toilet and that was the end of it. I know what you mean.they are not good!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 10:50:00 AM
    I love the moon and your poem too.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 6:27:00 AM
    lovely lyrical write indeed, my friend - I can't return Soupmail at the moment (System 500 error). congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 3:09:00 AM
    your lines make me sing...luna is a word i like -- so mysterious, romantic, sara.. will vome back to see it unravel... lovely..;) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 11:23:00 PM
    N A as L U as Luna - I love the moon and all of it's inherent mystery & beauty, so in my bias for Her I think this lyric is a delight Sara - I really like the sleep walk emphasis - and lu nes ta is so elegant - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 4:11:00 PM
    The love this moon you write about "sandy

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 1:40:00 PM
    This must be a song!

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 1:05:00 PM
    aweee.. Sara, now I'm in love with the moon... sweet....pd

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 11:05:00 AM
    A beautiful poem in progress.....will come back.