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Tanka 1

I call out your name.
But, you never answer me.
You are always there.
I try to reach out to you.
You’re a shadow in my mind.


© Holly P. Moore
    October 2012

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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:31:00 AM

    Good emotional tanka.Lovely read.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Really nice... God Bless :)

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 6:45:00 AM

    Holly now you are cooking on gas, as we say here, your wings are spreading very nicely indeed, good luck and keep going...David

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 4:58:00 AM

    He knows your love and he watches over you..he sent you white feathers didn't he? Another touching poem from the heart.