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Autumn Air

cover blown away
standing naked before you
leaves in autumn air
Written for: Russell Sivey "Up in the Autumn Air" contest Written: 10/19/2012 By: Carol Brown 2nd Place Winner

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:05:00 PM

    Carol, a wonderful little win... how did i miss this poem..pd

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:01:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work...Sara

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:00:00 PM

    a round of applause for your worthy win, carol..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Carol.. :-)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:28:00 AM

    Thank you everyone. Your comments and congrats are truly appreciated. Love, Carol XXX

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 10:37:00 AM

    congratulations on your win dear Carol.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:31:00 AM

    It's a nice imagery,Carol.Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Carol xx

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:35:00 AM

    Carol, congrats on your lovely win with this poem on Autumn air!

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 10:28:00 PM

    CONGRATS CAROL ON A GORGEOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR UP IN AUTUMN AIR LUV.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:47:00 PM

    I sure remember this fantastic senryu. congrats on your win with it.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:29:00 PM

    A rather indelicate position in which to be. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 9:30:00 AM

    very nice lines! Carol! goodluck! jimbo

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 8:44:00 PM

    This is excellent and so beautiful Haiku my dear Carol. I can feel the beauty of autumn while reading it. It has given me a rich vicarious experience since we don't have this here. This is a winner for me. Well, all the best. Love/ hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:35:00 PM

    This is really beautiful. Carol, the best Senryu i've seen in a long time...

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 10:48:00 AM

    lovely words

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 7:06:00 AM

    lovely indeed, Carol

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:04:00 AM

    a magical scene u painted with charming words Carol luv .. winning wishes for Russell's challenge on this happy Sunday ..

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:24:00 PM

    what a short but fantastic way to do the contest. I think you came up with a great one!!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 6:16:00 PM

    nice one, Carol, enjoyed! Jag

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:17:00 PM

    * My My, Your Priceless Lovely Beauty Sure Knows How To Please An Innocent Young Lady, Ooops, I Meant 'Tease,' LOL. Seriously Although, Sweet Beautiful Carol Brown, I Do Love What I Find, 'Sunshine.' Heart Soul Mind, Doorways Through Timeless Time. 'Beautiful.' Sweet Kisses, And Thank You For Your Lovely Visit; Priceless. My Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:58:00 AM

    nicely penned Senryu Carol....love...Joseph

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:13:00 AM

    This is such a beautiful Senryu Carol. Love Gail

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:59:00 AM

    A great Senryu here Carol!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:18:00 AM

    Got to love the power of Autumn, eh? Excellent senryu!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:49:00 AM

    Reads like a winner to me..Very creative way of presenting the idea..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by...Have a great day!..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:27:00 AM

    Nice senryu!

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Very effective multiple interpretations...enjoyable.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:38:00 AM

    A strong senryu - poor tree.