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The Morning of the Hurricanes Part 2

 Continued from Part 1 

The White-Robed Maiden empties trash,
And fumbles with an untied sash,
- Her virgin urn’s awash with ash -
            She’s pacing in the Palace

Her hopes converge in coffee spoons,
Her memories adrift in dunes,
Yet still she smiles with teeth like prunes,
            And lips of painted callous

And long before the midnight drains
- The Saviour wakes, the Loser gains -
The waters of the Hurricanes
            Will fill her empty chalice


The storm behind the clarinets,
The silver flutes, the castanets,
The foghorns belching in quartets,
            The bagpipes, puffed and swollen,

Is keeping time to tambourines
While Tom Thumb and his Four-Inch Queens,
They curse themselves and philistines, 
            For time they’ve lost or stolen

They stumble through the old domains,
They cannot stop the Hurricanes -
The fountain weeps, the mountain wanes,
            And sands just keep on rollin’


The Hunchbacks juggle twisted canes
And blanch before the Hurricanes
In melted sleet, in frozen rains,
            In bruised and battered sandals

They’ll groan within the land of gulls,
The land of stones, the land of nulls,
They’ll crawl between the blackened lulls,
            For Night Time brooks no candles

They’ll pray to Dogs, while Nuns and Dukes,
Reflect on long forgotten Spooks -
It’s really more than random flukes
            That doors are lacking handles


The Crowds are throbbing in the jails,
Stooped, peering through a fence of nails -
The light within their eyeballs pales
            With plastic flame that sputters

They’re sleeping there because they must,
Their eyelids hang like peeling rust,
Their tears, palled pellets in the dust,
            Behind the bolted shutters

They’ll reawake without their pains
The Morning of the Hurricanes,
Without their sores, without their stains,
Their agonies will fill the drains
            And overflow the gutters

 End 

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:20:00 AM

    Enjoyed this one..It has such power, flow, and rhythm to it..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:19:00 PM

    It's just awesome! Love it so much. Best wishes, Larisa

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:50:00 PM

    Digestion has taken on new meaning. Will read this many times and find amazing new messages every time. Wonderful rendering of hurricanes and surrounding action.

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 1:26:00 PM

    So many thoughts coelesce in your rhymes; it's just mind blowing.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Man Terry! I am folded over and over, again and again in your hurricane of frightening delight. One image outdoes the previous. How do you find the twist of words, the pictures of desperation, the futility of the status quo and make them sing without an acoustic guitar? Hurricane Terry has hit land. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:47:00 AM

    Incredible poem here Terry. You always write such awesome poems. Bravo!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 5:46:00 PM

    P.S. this is one of the best compositions I've read since joing PS about a week ago

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 5:45:00 PM

    I agree with Ilene. It has shades of a song by Dylan or the Police. Your descriptions are so deep. Excellent!

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:28:00 PM

    all i can say is one word - WOW!!!!! this is a masterpiece and deserves a few rereadings. you should feel very proud of yourself, my friend!