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Take A Look PT 2

Take A Look PT 2

Tower 2....

Take A deeper look, in extra dimensions
Toy soldiers played with by God with warring intentions
Innocent sheep handpicked for the slaughter
Militant sheep handpicked to Martyr
Events wrote into place by the author
Perfect recipe for an appetite for sacrifice
Warring Angel's released through the gates of paradise
To slay the foreman's who career for Beelzebub
Who's onsite supervising for the smell of blood
I can see the Angels, catching souls of who leaped
Humanity unified in prayer, to God it sound sweet
Racing up the towers is a legion of demons
Fueled by the fear from people screaming
Appetite for destruction chews away on those towers
In this Garden of Life God is picking its flowers
Can you visualize the graveyard amid the rubble
The crumbling of the towers had the sound muffled
1000 versions of the crucifix
Upon it angels with wings clipped
Eloi lama sabachthini from their lips
And beheaded demons with black blood that boils
Metaphoric descript. Of the oil
These creatures lost their lives for the God whom they're loyal
To this very day the saga continues
Fresh sacrifice of the day is on the menu!

By, Scribe ML


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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:59:00 AM

    VERY GOOD VISUALISATION HERE LOVE IT IT TAKES ONE TO A DIFFRENT DIMENTION JUST READING IT THANKYOU ALSO FOR COMMENTS ON MINE DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:46:00 PM

    A very nice write also,Scribe...Innocent lives sacrificed anywhere,is never good.Ya really hit me in the heart once again.How long must we let this go on?

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Sometimes the cosmos is naughty - may those casualties of true crime R.I.P. - I like the crucifix adaptation, ' we all have our cross to bear ' - convenient for the cartels that the evidence at ' ground zero ' got sold and shipped to China - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:12:00 PM

    Wow you went off on these two for real hope it becomes a trilogy and beyond

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Scribe, you took this poem, above.... any image I've ever had on the soup... it is a ver sad image of the way the rubble, held a graveyard. many brave stories are still untold... will you be writing a part 3??... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:51:00 AM

    intense thoughts put into this piece of the sign of the times .. i can see you worked hard on this .. well done! ..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 2:20:00 PM

    these poor people died, so those with the power those with the wealth could maintain the Status Quo... this is so good Marlon, should be published for all to read....

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:14:00 PM

    It makes me wonder...what will be next? Strong and awesome poem. Thought inspiring. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 4:19:00 PM

    Great follow up my poet brother. Your poetry is inspiring. Michael

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:56:00 PM

    Oil. when we do have our own. greed drives some people. great duo of poems.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Let us pick flowers together with God, in his beautiful garden. Beautifully poem S.Marlon! Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)