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moments

sometimes i think about moments
sometimes i think about special moments
and i know that i can never
receive another gift
and feel the same
i can never make another
promise in any name
i can never feel again 
what i gave away
though i try again and again
April took my love away
away with her to this very day
i cannot hurt for anyone else
i cannot give of my deepest self
i cannot dream like i dreamed of her
i have no desire for anyone on earth

at time i try to come to terms
with myself
find someone, anyone
yet having nothing to offer
no feeling, no desire, no passion
only temporal lust
should someone try to find me
they'd find someone they shouldn't trust
even though i'm an honest person
there could never be an  us
my moments would steal me away
and lesser love show up
a defeat by love that is in a grave
is still a betrayal of trust

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Life is to be lived and we should cherish each and every moment God gives us. This one made me sad. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:48:00 PM
    Sometimes it all just has to come out, may take some time but eventually the pain will be spent and you will wake up to a new adventure. Life is like that. All the best John, I hope it begins soon for you. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:47:00 PM
    the dead seem perfect because they're viewed through the rosy glow of nostalgic memory, without the flaws and foibles of the living...

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    Date: 10/24/2012 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Do this for me. Compleatly disregard this poem.
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    Date: 10/24/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No longer able to make mistakes.
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:19:00 AM
    John, some gift are waiting for you on the other side and are waiting for each and everyone of us... thank you for sharing this heart felt poem...always..pd

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:23:00 PM
    Your splendid poem makes you sound like you have a lot of loving, John... I'm sure that, with time, your 'wounds' will heal... Terry

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    Date: 10/20/2012 4:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Keep hoping
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 6:38:00 PM
    I don't believe so John, if she truly loved you and I believe she did, I think she would delight in your happiness. Wouldn't you if the role was reversed. Love never ends, it is an extension of oneself, one must not compare, no two loves are ever the same, please don't close your heart, God works in mysterious ways, forgive me if I have said too much, given from my heart with good intention, love and light vie

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    Date: 10/18/2012 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the responce but the piece is made with my true feelings. I dread someone close to me finding this piece offensive. But part of the cost of poetry is the pain.