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A Sure Travel Pass

blissful night torrent
enveloping my being
a sure travel pass
to the oblivion of sleep
I forgot my hard labour

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 1:48:00 PM

    excellent poem, a very clear message here...

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:25:00 PM

    I really like this tanka, my friend.