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Masterpiece in lies

The quest is on shimmering                                    the sand of time which
like sun rays in the                                                                       clocks in tune
golden sand                                                   to the sttuttering hearbeat


A tune in nine heard only by those looking hard and fast. A look in time Intent on the prize before their eyes.
Eyes on eyes Groping for a glimpse of the masterpiece.
A masterpiece in lies
copied from the
Sands of time.

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 7:07:00 PM

    For the many masterpiece lies...that continue threw the clouds...causing fogging moments....Just my thought of....your masterpiece ....title..Thanks for the write....Loved it....

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:13:00 AM

    I absolutely love the way you organized the lines in this poem, it makes it so intriguing to read and so unique! Wonderful, wonderful job darling!

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:06:00 AM

    Interesting work..Creative format..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara..Your presence at my work was uplifting..

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Delicate and subdued write, Vicky. Somewhat of a mind probe. Does it refer to plagerism and a fervent quest to win "the prize"? A murky day here, today. I went out for a walk to enjoy the rain.:) Better the rain I'm thinking, than the snow that's waiting in the clouds. Oie, I love Autumn, but Winter can have cold, slushy feet. Best wishes to you and yours, Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:44:00 AM

    modern verse, that still sneak esoteric knowledge, updating them. From what I see, Vicky, you are a brave poet, inventive.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:49:00 PM

    Holla back, Vicky!!! Loved the title --nice, strong texture for your "eyes Groping" phrasing. Tell me more about this style....! Been published before, cited by the Governor of CT and also in the New York Advocate, but this is altogether different. PEACE, Ellen/edrich5361@yahoo.com

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 10/19/2012 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops! No new style. I was just playing around.
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:06:00 PM

    compleatly confused.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 10/17/2012 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You have to 'look hard and fast'. I can see Drake's got it.
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:29:00 AM

    "A tune in nine heard only by those looking hard and fast". It is, sadly, the state of the world today. Especially when it comes to love...excellent piece!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 3:37:00 AM

    Which one? There are a number of poems by the name of "Sands of Time" ... I like the layout - lending an air and fragility to the poem. Love, Su

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 10/17/2012 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I can see the wheels in your brain turning.
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:53:00 AM

    Like the way you have set up your poem here Vicky. - A unique poem that you are the master of - well done!! Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 12:02:00 AM

    this is sure interesting. What inspired all this from you? what did you mean "copied from the Sands of time?" well, I wanted to tell you thanks for seeing my first post at Soup but it was not the beginning of my poetic journey. I have many poems that remain unposted here. I basically just post stuff related to the contests here and do not like to post more than one a day. How long have YOU been writing?? (I started in 2000!)