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Empty Wheelbarrow

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I dont want my poems in Poem Zoo!
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  1. Date: 12/18/2013 3:05:00 AM
    Went looking for more of your work, I'm sure it's all great. I'll check back later. Oh has our work just automatically gone to "Zoo", I assumed we had to make that happen. Maybe I shouldn't have deleted the e-mail so quick. Cheers for Scott

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 6:58:00 PM
    i finally got the horse theme.... have a nice life... LINDA

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Soupmail

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 6:32:00 AM
    As we age it does seem as if our wheelbarrow is slowly being emptied. I like your poem Ruben. Congrats

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:28:00 PM
    Belated congrats on your well deserved win! One of my favorites Ruben

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:25:00 PM
    I really like the idea that comes across with this one. one of the best in the contest. Congrats, Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:21:00 PM
    Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Ruben, good one xx

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:00:00 AM
    RUBEN O. WAY TO GO LUV .. BIG CONGRATS ON A WONDERFUL WRITE AND WIN TOO .. WOW

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:54:00 PM
    I love this! It has such a melancholy tone, the ending of a season that touches me. A lovely poem, Ruben (I talk to my flowers sometimes, and sometimes I have to scold them.......because they like to throw an occaisional party with the weeds!!)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 6:49:00 PM
    RUBEN, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:28:00 PM
    Very descriptive work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Lovely tanka, Ruben

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 10:53:00 AM
    This is a very nice Tanka by you Ruben!Lovely read.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Dear Ruben, I love this so much. It needs no form to capture my imagination. bravo! love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:40:00 PM
    ruben!!.. the tone and voice of this piece speak out loudly about aloness.. greeat work.. since my soupy mail is not running well, may i beep you regarding line 2.. i think it needs 7 syllables.. just my 2 cwnts... otherwise, winning piece,,:) huggs

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 10/17/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops! Thanks...I change it.
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 10:00:00 AM
    love it! very clever Ruben!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 9:21:00 AM
    Hi, Ruben! Reading this brilliant tanka of yours makes me want to try writing one-- but I just don't have the brains to write one right now. I think it's great how you used that "empty wheelbarrow" line, very effective-- all I could think of was , "oh shucks!"

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:47:00 AM
    Very nicely done...an artistic and pleasing rendering...

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