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fallen

Each and every breathe
a gasp, jerked beneath the relentless current
wait! fresh air!
denied, burdens, to much to bare
I once looked far beyond the stars
your ordinary selfish dropout
aching, praying to the god I dont believe
envisioning, who i believed I was meant to be
yet now, each, every jolt 
seems to take much more toll
noticed heartbeat, tingling, thoughts, disrupted
Constance, almost it seems
I will find my path
I will defeat deaths wrath
I will look back now and again
and thank God, i was never the fallen.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:11:00 PM

    Kennith....I like the hope....like Kevin Costner said in the apocalyptic movie.... The Postman...."things are gettin' better all the time" good one! Jimbo

    stomps Avatar kennith stomps Date: 10/17/2012 9:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, It's truly appreciated!