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Baby Please

Oh my darling, how I wish I knew your name.
I've called you many things and Loves' the only one to stay.
I've called you many times, now won't you come my way?

Oh child at night, you, you rattle through my bones.
But I wake up on cold mornings to find I'm all alone.
And I cried, "Baby please, I can't lose all that I need".

And I cried, "Baby please, I am only a man,
And I'm working, trying the best that I can".
I can't do this all alone, so I cried, yes I cried,
"Baby please, won't you please just come back home".

I knew all my tears would be in vein,
But cried on anyway, to try and wash away the pain.
I've called you many things, but "Goodbye" would only stain. 

Oh I cried, "Baby please, you'd be cold to walk away,
But surely we'd both freeze if you can't find the heart to stay.
So I cried, cried, cried, "I love you more than anything in this world,
Now you've go to, got to, got to be my girl".

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:45:00 PM

    lovely verse... very romantic.. enjoyed !!! thanks for your great share <3SK

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Kristopher, love your lyric..xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:33:00 PM

    This sounds like a song, wish I could hear the music that goes with it, enjoyed your verse, vie

    Higgs Avatar Kristopher Higgs Date: 10/16/2012 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I did write it as a song but do not have any music to go with it. It was inspired by Blues guitar instrumentals.