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Two Timer's

The edges of my laced sewn thought 
Fences my heart when we are apart

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  1. Date: 10/20/2012 1:20:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats..Sometimes my thoughts need to be laced up and calmed down..Great work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Strong image, clean optimism - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 9:15:00 PM

    so much said, in so few words. lovely. hugs. :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 3:35:00 PM

    wow, you did GREAT with the challenge of this one. Love the lace metaphor.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:49:00 PM

    Oh very nicely done Joy - Shaz

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:47:00 PM

    nice write Joy

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:12:00 PM

    Very nice. Looks like a winner. About my poem. "To Forgive or Not" I was speaking from my own point of view only. and as if it were my own personal problem. Love, Joyce

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington Date: 10/14/2012 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know it was your own personal thing dear Joyce, but just saying it matches my situation and I relate a lot. One love!