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A yarn of sunshine

"I've got sunshine" 

TANKA~ 1
This heavy weight wind
jiggles the chimes limbs hanging
sensitively 
a thousand sound waves invade 
visible radiation
~~~~~

TANKA~ 2
Dark moonlight tempest
blunders off the mountain top
a massive flooring…
the courageous beam of light
saved souls upon meadow blades
~~~~~

TANKA ~3 
A place called daylight
where the beam is always pure
luminescence 
if you could only feel this
you’d ask to hold the torchlight 
~~~~~

TANKA~ 4
Somewhere were you sleep
the fluorescence substance light 
absorbs your beauty
every second that you breath 
the light becomes like sunshine 
~~~~~

TANKA  ~5 
Sky of falling stars
belong in my diary
notification
renewing my wedding vows
sunshine begins with me
~~~~~

TANKA~ 6
Missed the snooze button;
pendulum rods tick out loud 
morning bird and worm;
sunlit curtains sooth out rays 
anonymous melody
~~~~~

TANKA ~7
Two rainbows petals 
peek outside with loneliness
against no sunlight
rainy weather condition 
no color will bring you back 
~~~~~

by;PD 
10-10-12
for: contest

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:45:00 PM

    This is beautiful and excellent in all domain..~A.O

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:33:00 AM

    Tanka collection of some distinction! I don't think I need to say anymore. Superb!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Stopping by once more my dearest sis to say thank you for your message the other day. I'm so glad you've read my soupmails. Well, I can't stop thanking you so much also for everything, the support and time etc. Well, I hope it isn't raining anymore in Texas and wishing you always a happy sunshine there especially today! By the way, I came to finalize my contest. For now, I'm saying bye and great day!. Good night here now 'coz I'm still so tired and need to go to bed. TC, God bless! L4evr, Leo

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:56:00 AM

    Absolutely stunning! Love this! & ya 9 Lives is for the contest ;) Thanks!

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 11:19:00 PM

    Hello, my dearest sis PD! Are you there? How are you? Hope you're doing better/great. Sending my sweetest big hugs again to you with soup mail. Have a nice day! love always & 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:28:00 PM

    Thank you for your Christmas wish and visit. I hope your New Year begins fresh with many blessing to come! Thanks for your continued support. Luv, Tanya Lee

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Very nice tankas. You're unique in your writing style and I hope you will continue like this. Just loved no: 2,4 and 7. -- Sean

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Thank you so much my dearest sis-ie for your precious time stopping by leaving me your warm thoughts and greetings for this Christmas. Have a merry, merry Christmas also to you and your family. Sending you all my biggest sweet Christmas hugs with my loving wishes for all the best on this season and the New Year to come! love always & 4ver, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Awesome as always..I really like number 3. Sorry I missed you the other night...been down with the flu. Maybe tonight? It's working now. Thanks for reading my poems! Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:49:00 AM

    nice weave of color sound and texture =),,, thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:01:00 AM

    Hey, PD. did I thank you for being patient with me the other day? That was so sweet of you!!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:18:00 AM

    Hi! thanks my sisie! I'm doing fine despite my cold which I got this morning. I was on my way to bed when i saw you on line. Well, wishing you all the best there. Hope you're enjoying the day while at work. Sending you more hugs and good night my dear sis! But, before I go, I'll read again this outstanding chain of tanka you wrote for me. I extremely love and enjoy them all. love always & 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Dear PD, thank you so much for your stopping by ,,every comments of yours is highly appreciated ,,means so much to me...am honor to be part of this soup and so blessed to read your brilliant works...Bravo ....:) <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:37:00 AM

    yes, I read the section for me that you wrote using the idea of my haiku set. You did a very clever thing there and I commend you for supporting the victims of breast cancer. Ravindra made quite a tribute, didn't he? Thanks for that blog and for your focus on that issue. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:39:00 AM

    Reviewing these. You sure had fun making these clever poems. HOw are things going, PD?

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:54:00 AM

    My million thanks again my dear sis PD! You've truly brighten my day with sunshine for your visit and especially for inviting me to celebrate with you. I'm glad you extremely enjoyed the Thanksgiving Day with your family! Wish we have it here, too. God bless you and your family always! take care! love always 'n 4-ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 9:13:00 PM

    Ooooooooooooooh ...Nice beautiful verses here ! 8) Thanks for the sweet note--I appreciate it. Happy turkey day :D Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:57:00 PM

    They are all wonderful..I really liked Tanka 4. Thanks for commenting on my "Paranoia" poem. xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 9:45:00 PM

    I'm so glad to stop by and read your tanka once again which you've written for my contest. I love them all and so with the greatest poet who wrote it. Ok, good night my sis! Sweet dreams! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 12:16:00 PM

    I think it's beautiful...it's like it tells a story or least I think it does...Hey, will you take a look at my Didactic? Thanks for always commenting on my work. It means a lot.....xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 1:15:00 AM

    So many wonderful tanka pd.. My favourite would be number 4 .. Glad to be here reading your poetry once again dear...Charma

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:42:00 PM

    Wow top marks, you have a real talent. love your smile. thanks for posting. best wishes. Pete.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 10:52:00 AM

    fantastic poem..Big big congratulation friend PD for winning 1st place in Norie's contest. you deserved it. Hugs! Maria (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:32:00 PM

    yeah,,, me.... xox..pd

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 6:53:00 PM

    hello cutie lol check out my one about stellar Passion u might like it Thank You Roy

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:17:00 PM

    Fantastic and awesome piece,PD..I love this write..Wonderful set of Tankas..You started from the nascent stage to the final...This shows class and dexterity...Ride on pal,and thanks for stopping by...XOXO...Love O.A

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:42:00 PM

    They string up so well, like strung pearls congrats on your win P.D. you are still going strong, sending you my love, as always, vie

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:05:00 PM

    i knew this would win, PD... yo go, girl!.. congrats with huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 2:55:00 PM

    I remember seeing this fabulous set before, PD. BIG congrats on your big win. Congratulations, my friend.

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