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Writing The Saddest Lines Like Pablo Neruda

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Writing The Saddest Lines Like Pablo Neruda

without you the sky is too big to be peaceful and sleep under
without feeling the pain in different shades of grey
I miss you like a longing like an orphan like a hope like a prayer
and without you I dream in shades of grey
under a sky too immense to be peaceful under
You with eyes like a river I can walk along the banks of and never reach the end of
but trying is some of the best part
Without you I am just a small part of myself
I carry you in my heart all day like an ache I cannot soothe
under a sky too immense to be peaceful

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:24:00 AM

    Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:47:00 PM

    stopping by to read this one again....you are a great poet.... PD

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:17:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Sharon. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:21:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup, enjoyed your poem, John

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:55:00 PM

    SHARON, your poem is awesome, thank you for sharing your pen.. always :-) PD

    Piwang Avatar Sharon Rose Piwang Date: 2/28/2014 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:21:00 AM

    when you are writing in the style of a famous, that is called a parody, not free verse. hope that helps. hugs, Catie :)

    Piwang Avatar Sharon Rose Piwang Date: 2/28/2014 2:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is long overdue, but thanks for reading :) Unfortunately PoetrySoup does not the 'parody' option...