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Transcendent Feelings

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Transcendent Feelings

His tragic symphony plays its sadistic
melody in my mind consistently.
The arousing masochism that lingers in
this clouded air
knocks on my door with a riveting rivet
that drives me insane incredibly.
Sanity therefore departs my mind
as its "in" brother fights for a reason
to exist in this season of deplorable beauty.
The symphony has now left me in a
tiresome state of nudity,
where everything shines with unbearable
cruelty and a hint of raging novelty,
dies.

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Beautiful peice of writing here. So very discriptive. Well done! :)

    Wolf Avatar Ravenn Wolf
    Date: 10/17/2012 6:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Sabrina xD
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 5:31:00 AM
    Beautiful piece..I could feel heart and soul through every word..JL

    Wolf Avatar Ravenn Wolf
    Date: 10/17/2012 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you JL, that was honestly my initial goal in writing this. Thank you.
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 8:05:00 PM
    ‡ I Understand This Place This State Of Mind In Part, Beautiful Precious Ravenn. I Could Venture Into Quite An Extended Moment In Re, Hopelessness And Melancholy And Chains And On And On ? Seek And You Shall Find. Swimming As One Can Unto The Horizon; Reaching For The Sky. Everything Is Going To Alright, Rock A By, Rock A By - Beautiful Poem. Truly. Love, Rachel ‡

    Wolf Avatar Ravenn Wolf
    Date: 10/17/2012 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Rachel, your opinions and compliments are greatly appreciated :)