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Bird Songs - Part II: Blood-Red Cardinals

The songs of Cardinals
nesting by my bedroom window,
woke me up,
woke me back into the presence of mind
to not sleep my life away.

I can still dream while awake -
it's far better dreaming fresh tomorrows,
than it is to only dream of yesterdays.

Blood-Red Cardinals
singing in the mulberry tree,
let your music wash over me,
disintegrating the armour of regret -
keep me naked in the now.

The Cardinals engage in courtship,
engrossed by every detail,
bright flames flitting in green,
a complementary union
weaving into the future.

Fate is etched in stone,
but stone can be bent
into new directions
pulsing with the innocence
of Cardinal songs.
One must fully absorb the moment,
to appreciate the dreams
of better tomorrows.

Blood-Red Cardinals
singing in the willow tree,
let your music wash over me,
disintegrating the armour of fear,
keeping us naked in the now.





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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 4:33:00 PM

    One of your best Chris. Your images spin out nice in this follow up bird songs write. Good to here from you. Michael

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 5:40:00 PM

    Stanza three and five...they gave me chills. Good chills. Very nicely written. And the last stanza--wowed me. Excellent work once again. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 12:26:00 PM

    I've loved this poem since the very first time I read it...your words become more and more alive, all the time :) Such beautiful imagery...such beautiful memories weaving into the now and the future...

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Chris I love this even though we don't have Cardinals here....David

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 6:00:00 PM

    such beautiful imagery in this one, Chris. You brought those cardinals to life before my mind's eye. Wonderful poem. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 5:25:00 PM

    Ah yes. My team won the NLDS last night. Thanks for the tribute.T.S.

    Situation Avatar The Situation Date: 10/13/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I didn't know you were a Cardinal fan.