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About This Poem

Raft

Pisces vacation...
  muscles melting in the sun
    waves cradle gently
      bodiless, only the now
        Mother Ocean rocks her child

10/12/2012

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  1. Andresen Avatar
    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 10/30/2012 11:48:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/29/2012 8:38:00 PM
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    TIM..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/29/2012 3:13:00 PM
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    Loved the "feeling" this one gave from the first time I saw it and also today. Congrats on your win.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 10/29/2012 12:00:00 PM
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    CONGRATS TIM ON AN EXCELLEN T WRITE AND WIN LUV ON SUNSHINE ..
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 10/29/2012 10:09:00 AM
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    Big congratulations on your win Tim xx
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/29/2012 5:51:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 10/29/2012 5:47:00 AM
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    Congratulations Tim for winning 3rd Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/23/2012 6:57:00 AM
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    Very original, Tim. Me likes!
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    Caroline Cécile Delacroix
    Date: 10/15/2012 7:10:00 PM
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    Creative and original! Nice imagery here! Enjoyed it! :)
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 10/12/2012 1:27:00 PM
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    Beautiful peaceful and serene, you bring out the gentleness of mother nature and her precious sea, thanks Tim, vie
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 10/12/2012 10:07:00 AM
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    A smile to my face on this one Tim. Imagery unlimited...fills the mind. One love. Joy Wells
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    ilene bauer
    Date: 10/12/2012 9:41:00 AM
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    so relaxing! i love the "muscles melting!"
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    Leo Larry Amadore
    Date: 10/12/2012 9:37:00 AM
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    A timeless moment captured...I liked this.
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    harry horsman
    Date: 10/12/2012 9:05:00 AM
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    awesome rendition, Tim, leaves one indeed with a sense of isolation...
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    craig cornish
    Date: 10/12/2012 9:00:00 AM
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    Wonderful Tim!! Somehow?? Is that child you perhaps?
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    Stephen Parker
    Date: 10/12/2012 8:27:00 AM
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    Unlike Kathryn, I will eat any fish that doesn't eat me first. A lovely lullaby on the ocean wide. Enjoyed your tuna tanka!
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    kathryn collins
    Date: 10/12/2012 8:06:00 AM
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    Hey Tiim - My birthday is in March. I don't eat fish but love Mother Ocean rocking her child. Beautiful image. Thanks for your insightful comment on Jeanne Marie. Jeannie was my daughter and died in 95 at the age of 21. It was a snowmobile accident in late morning on the brightest sunniest day you've ever seen. love, Kathy