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My Angelic 'Mother'

As I put my head on your lap
You caress my hair, 
Lost myself in 
your gentle touch, 
my love for you grows more
Love, the love 
I do not desire to share

You are like the sun 
of the morning
Welcoming me with
your warm embrace
You are like the full moon 
by a delightful night
Keeping me Placid, 
Glimmering my face

Though, we battle with
our colloquy swords
Though, we dis-harmonize
You approach me, 
with your 
anchored, adept, affable mind
Implanting morals inside me, 
Authentic, Noble and kind

Forever, having
absent-minded smile 
on your Face
Laughing, making me laugh
Though, my blooper 
fetches the Dilemma 
Molding our life tough
You always laugh, 
you make me laugh

The truth, You are a mirror
A Clarion, classy mirror 
Where, I can see through
For me You sacrificed
Fortune, Fascination and fame
Everything but truth
You are only capable of love, 
and love is all you See
In your eyes I can see
The real me

You had dreams, 
Beautiful dreams indeed 
Unfortunate, 
don't know what they were
Have no clue
You say, only one dream
you should know
The dream which came true
The dream of you

You kept me warm, 
warm in the Winter
You still keep 
my heart warm inside
You are an open book
As I go ahead, each word
untouched and Compelling 
Though it is not the end, 
it would never end
Cause you are 
high as the sky
And wide

They say, -
I am a god sent to earth-
HE Gifted me my life-
True so true, - 
God gave me birth-
My Angelic mother -, 
You gave me birth-

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  1. Date: 10/18/2012 1:57:00 PM

    Wow! That's a lovely dedication to one who has obviously made a huge impact by her unconditional love. Mothers really are a gift that keeps on giving. Nicely done Payal!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:56:00 AM

    Excellent tribute to her Payal!Enjoyed the read.Welcome to poetrysoup.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:19:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Payal. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:12:00 AM

    a mother is our god she gave us birth and she is our creator and as i m hearing from my childhood the creator is our god right? i have already posted this poem on other site and it was accepted by many readers and i hope the same happens here too...so please enjoy