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trees molt

trees molt --
an acorn is covered
in darkness

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 7:15:00 PM

    a tree molts [1 tree?] now I have to google molts LOL [that's right me bucko My haiku king blog them good!] ;) Light & Love

    Henderson Avatar Charles Henderson Date: 11/6/2012 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    molt-- to shed or cast off, as leaves and acorns
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/6/2012 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ah HA a subltle metaphor to the peeling bark?
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Aha! Now, this haiku has a touch of subjectivity to it. And guess wot....I think this makes it a great haiku(in my opinion). I returned a very lengthy soupmail(in 3 parts).

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 1:36:00 PM

    You captured the essence of a good haiku. There are component parts capped with a dissonant fringe. Enjoyed your nature discourse.