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tanka

she asks the bright star

to come closer, pretty please

with breath that fogs glass

         the old window pane rattles

         while a draft shifts a ringlet 

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:33:00 AM
    aside from the total ensemble of thought, pretty please did it for me, cyn... super congrats. ey, i'm on colon detox, ewwwh!.:) huggs

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:18:00 AM
    Big congrats from Spain xx

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:10:00 PM
    Great tanka, such talent. congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 11:33:00 PM
    Congratulations friend Cyndi..nice Tanka :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:17:00 PM
    congratulations on your wonderful tanka.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 8:35:00 AM
    Hi Cyndi - I stopped by to read you delightful poetry this morning, this one being so dear. I've not commented on each because when I comment I have to go through all kinds of hoops to get back to my favorites. Hopefully this will end. love you, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:45:00 AM
    An excellent Tanka here Cyndi!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:57:00 AM
    Awesome tanka, Cyndi...Congrats on your great win with this beautiful Tanka!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:15:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:19:00 AM
    Unique as only you can be, Cyndi. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:10:00 PM
    Beautiful Cyndi, Many congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 10:57:00 PM
    Just lovely Cyndi! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:05:00 PM
    oh my I know who this is our little poppet!! GREAT write Dee. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:09:00 PM
    Whew!... Purrrfecto, Cyndi!...I immediately saw an image of your little girl looking out the window on a cold winter night...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:41:00 PM
    A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Cyndi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Cyndi. Su

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 8:28:00 PM
    Lovely tanka full of imagery, one of innocence and joy, thanks for sharing Cyndi, vie