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Elemental Longing

Heartbeats in a ring of red roses breathe mist to the perfume of petals swirling blood speckles to the taste of teardrops in tongues. Truth cuts through rot when feeling naked iron. 17.07.2012

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:16:00 PM

    I enjoyed working with this lovely Elemental poem of yours. It was very fun and effortless to come up with my own version. Thank you for the inspiration and constant encouragement!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:02:00 AM

    Christine now this is much better than Chris's ....ps I have told him ha ha ...David

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:48:00 PM

    Wonderful poem, Christine. I am wondering what kind of poetic challenge you two have set up for yourselves. Anyway, the imagery is similar, was this an experiment...I think so. LOL :) Excellent poem! hugs, Catie :)