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Below is the poem entitled Shadow which was written by poet Nathan Fehr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I sit here all alone
My heart cold as stone
Nobody will care
For the regrets i bare

I'm on my own
My depression shown
Dying inside
For the times i cried

Is on my mind
Wanting to send
Myself to my end

When I've died
I will look inside
To see what i am
And be glad i tried

I shut my mouth
And close my eyes
Countless regrets
And endless sighs

I didn't try
Let him pass me by
I don't know why
I deserve to die

All i am
And all I'll be
Is empty lies
And faded memories

He walked right by
I died inside
I am to blame
I just sat and cried

I brought much shame
To my name
Its not the same
Theres too much pain

I want to forget
What I've done
But what will that do
Prove I'm worthless too

He was all i had
And now hes gone
But I'm not sad
I'm really mad...

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  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:02:00 PM
    You are not defined by someone else. You are a special gift to the world who will, given time be a shining light to others. Your soul cries for acceptance and it will come. I promise you.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:02:00 PM
    Amazing expressions here, my friend. Know that you are never alone. Brilliant pieces, as always. I can relate to this piece and it saddens me. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:13:00 PM
    It's beautifully depressing, I love it. The vibe I took from this piece is that you have lost a friend to suicide? if that's the case I understand, I actually have one I wrote for him on PS it's called 'oceans of tears". I totally understand the anger side of grief drowning out the sad. It feels like we have been abanndoned. If my vibe was off I apologize, It's just how I interpretted it. great work, as always a pleasure to read. Katei

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh wow.......sorry for your loss, that seems a little too harsh. but you have your friends here on PS too. keep your head up, great writers always know the feelings they express on their work. your poem is heartbreaking but beautiful so well done.
    Fehr Avatar Nathan Fehr
    Date: 10/10/2012 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Its actually about my mom got rid of him and he was really all i had, i didnt have friends cause i was too busy with my dog. He was everything and the best thing thats ever happened to me, my mom got mad so she decided that would be a suitable punishment.
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:50:00 PM
    Nathan, a powerful poem - well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:54:00 PM
    Boy that is so emotionaly charged that I am worried about you. There is always hope and a way to let go of the past and to forgive not just others but ones self. Never quit and never give up because if you do give up then you loose and evil wins. This poem is too heart felt to be just made up so please turn it over to God and live.