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  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Interesting perspective Joann

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Delilah's "Adultery" contest Joann. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:25:00 AM

    languid phrases that fives a different take on the theme, joann.. a fave!..my happy congrats on your greeat spot!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win friend Joann. (^_^) hugs

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:54:00 AM

    Well written Joann! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:07:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your win Joann xx

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 11:08:00 PM

    Well done Joan ......Seren

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Joann, congratulations in Delilah's " Adultery , forgive or not to forgive " contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read her winners. Good Night~ Always & Forever PD"

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 11:09:00 AM

    Very sensual poem. Interesting, too.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Hi, Joann, You have captured in these beautiful lines what almost everyone experiences sometime or the other in his or her life!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 8:24:00 PM

    This is fiction,but we all have temptation

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:51:00 PM

    wow, true one, Joann? this is awesome. I did one on MY forbidden fruit. It was on another poetry page!!!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:38:00 PM

    EXCELLENT JOANN FROM A WOMAN WHO HAS DONNED BOTH ROLES IN LIFE .. FORBIDDEN LASTS BUT A MOMENT BUT REAL A LIFETIME .. A TOP NOTCH WINNER LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Joann are being bad? I like how you've captured his features and penned them! Forbidden fruit is always sweeter, just ask Eve! Good piece Lady!